I am interested in reading more!
ch 0 1 The Life of A Horse Named Cloud
Fantasy · coolhorse202
So far its pretty good although the grammar isn't great.
ch 0 1 The Life of A Horse Named Cloud
Fantasy · coolhorse202
Great chapter, I am interested to find out what happens next! Cant wait to read more!
ch 11 Olivia and the Stones
Action · Hazel_and_Pookie
sane here! I'm learning russian on duolingo too and a bunch of other languages but I've been putting most of my efforts into Russian.
ch 58 Blast from the past
Fantasy · Garessta
Well, if you ignore the four bullies personalities..... which are not beautiful what so ever.
In fact, their true forms were the definition of hot vampires and werewolves. Those who thought that vampires and werewolves were ugly will get rid of this mindset after setting eyes on these sets of beauties.
Fantasy · Flabbergasted
Why don't those "witch's" just ignore Joana if her presence/existence bothers them so much? Hopefully they'll be given a good lesson and never bully anyone again.
"I wonder why the villagers didn't beat her pregnant mother to death. If they had done that then we wouldn't have to put up with a girl like her everyday~,"
Fantasy · Flabbergasted
I hope the FL can get out of her current situation as soon as possible... This is a great chapter
ch 0 1 The Reality Of Her life
Fantasy · Flabbergasted
Oh, no...! She's gonna be so embarrassed
She laughed, pulled the chair and sat down arrogantly. "Mr Sly or whatever you call yourself I don't care, actually I know the CEO and his name is Mr Fyn, he is my fiancee, so you better get going before he sees you on his chair. And let me tell you, he is not someone to play with."
Urban · Elizabeth_Maris
what if he's working for that bald guy and those rogues?
"Why here then? I don't mean to be rude or anything, I just love to meet new people and to know about them. We don't get many here. So…." He said nervously.
Fantasy · Akshata_Vaidya_6634
maybe she's just in her head too much?
After placing my things in their right places, I got out of the house and unlocked my car. I need to check the garage after I come back. I stumbled into my car after tripping over literally nothing. Yeah I have those days where I can trip on anything, including air.
Fantasy · Akshata_Vaidya_6634
I really like vampires too! I think they are the best supernatural creatures out there! I think it has great potential! I noticed you spelled heard as "Hurd" and there were a few other misspellings they're not to bother some for me though. so far it's pretty good, keep up the good work, and I think more chapters would be great!
ch 0 1 Prologue
Fantasy · Jinxx_5425
and the other horses too!
"GET AWAY FROM MY HORSE!" She screamed before sinking her swords into the back of the creature.
Fantasy · Kelly_Starrz
It's great so far! keep up the good work, I am looking forward to more chapters!
ch 0 6 His Attention
Fantasy · Four_Percent
I like this doctor he seems nice to Rein. So far I really like the book, keep up the good work!
'No wonder our King kept this young man by his side. He must have seen potential in him.' He nodded in praise of their King for having the foresight and discovering this diamond in the rough.
Fantasy · ObsidianOrbs
I am a little confused here... From what I have read so far the story seems good. Grammar could be better, other then that I am looking forward to reading more of this book already.
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Fantasy · Ella_Dominic23
I don't know why but this made me laugh....
Whooshing whoo hoo
Fantasy · Ella_Dominic23
It's really good from what I've read, the grammar isn't that great but maybe in future chapters it'll be better. So far I think the character development/design is pretty good. I really think this book has lots of potential! I am going to be keeping an eye out for more chapters
The Life of A Horse Named Cloud
Fantasy · coolhorse202