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Commented I would love to know the prominent features. Is there a gigantic city that tower over a mountain? a prominent figure at the top of a hill? A cliff face?
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Commented I like the introduction so far, but this paragraph is a POV shift.
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overall I like it. besides the POV shift, and a little bit of me wanting more detail on the big epic overhead of the 'world' it's well written good job!