The book is great but there r way too many grammar issues.
ch 23 Kelvins dream
Fantasy · Alphamini
"My soulmate," Torak answered, there was happiness and pride that laced in his voice as he looked at Raine with his eyes that filled with admiration. "—my world, you're everything to me." He added and leaned over to kiss her forehead softly.
Fantasy · jikanyotomare
Torak pulled the car into an underground garage as he said. "Welcome home."
Fantasy · jikanyotomare
Plz spare him he didn't have a choice and couldn't disobey his Alpha
"Alpha… I didn't know…I would never hurt my Luna…I will never do that…" He pleaded, dragging his broken body. "It's Alpha Xavier who ordered me…"
Fantasy · jikanyotomare
Couldn't have said it better myself
Torak didn't give his order to stop until a minute later when the Lycan couldn't even move a finger. "Stop." He said coldly.
Fantasy · jikanyotomare
Yeah ig
All the lycans thatwere present, holding their breath when they felt the pressured ambience from the Supreme Alpha. Torak didn't hold the title for nothing. Only for Raine he would bow his head down and kneel, out of that he was the most feared Lycans along with his brothers.
Fantasy · jikanyotomare
Wait WHAT!!
"No." Raphael shook his head and gestured to the warrior to clean up the mess. "He's not even alive to begin with."
Fantasy · jikanyotomare
He is extremely angry
"Belphegor." Torak called him by his name. "Don't you dare to come near her—" Torak's voice was deep and deadly calm, but it was full of threat and warning.
Fantasy · jikanyotomare
Well R.I.P who ever is there
His tender black eyes hardened when he looked over Raine's shoulder as a deep thunderous roared erupted from his chest.
Fantasy · jikanyotomare
Awww that's so freaking adorable!!!
The wolf whimpered softly when he saw Raine didn't give any reaction and still didn't breathe. He put his snout between his front legs and lowered his body, so his size wouldn't intimidate her.
Fantasy · jikanyotomare
How I imagine him looking
The white fur sprouted all over his body through the T-shirt he was wearing.This stunning transformation happened less than a minute, but in her eyes, those short while felt like forever. And in front of her, instead of Torak, it was a huge white wolf.
Fantasy · jikanyotomare
There's nothing wrong with that I actually want one as a pet too
"Do you really want to see my wolf?" Torak asked huskily. By any mean, he didn't want to scare her.
Fantasy · jikanyotomare
This will be interesting
[Can you show me your wolf form?]
Fantasy · jikanyotomare
So that's a yes lol
"So, do you want to sleep with me?" Torak asked, trapped her petite body between his strong arms, looking at how she shook her head vigorously. Ignoring the gestured, he shrugged nonchalantly. "Silence meant yes."
Fantasy · jikanyotomare
But you know she can't talk so what's the point
Raine bit down her lips, wanted to cry in frustration. Torak clearly knew that she couldn't, she wanted to talk, but somehow she just couldn't.
Fantasy · jikanyotomare
Awww the thought of him doing that is cute!
Torak walked with her silently, sometime he would receive a call. And most of the time, he would play with her hair. Raine didn't mind it. Actually, she liked it.
Fantasy · jikanyotomare
Smells...like perfection
The soft strands between his fingers made him hummed in satisfaction, he took a longer time to play with her hair, before he leaned in and gave a quick kissed on her cheek. She smells good, like the scent of the soil after rain, so refreshing and pure.
Fantasy · jikanyotomare
Lol basically yeah
The soft strands between his fingers made him hummed in satisfaction, he took a longer time to play with her hair, before he leaned in and gave a quick kissed on her cheek. She smells good, like the scent of the soil after rain, so refreshing and pure.
Fantasy · jikanyotomare
I love this book so much! The plot and everything is perfect. I would totally recommend. This book is just truly beautiful...(╥﹏╥)..........
Flash Marriage: The Domineering Wife
Urban · Chichii