Black plain protag?
Minos smiled as he saw most of the enemies change their expressions, showing their fear of this sensation.
Fantasy · RVN_1998
Wait who laughed?
'Probably.' Minos laughed before entering the area that housed the largest magical training facility in the entire kingdom.
Fantasy · RVN_1998
"Aye, aye!" Miraj chirped, only his head protruding above the table while on Sylvester's lap. He loved that everyone could hear him and see him now.
Fantasy · MisterImmortal
Some of your chapters are mixed up friend, around chapter 50 I’m completely lost in the timeline
Current unlocked world map (this will be updated whenever I can get to it.)
Fantasy · WriterTheos
I’m gonna throw out a guess so I can come back in however many chapter and see if I was right. The dude who was called “your highness” in one of the previous chapters that asked about Nina will end up abducting her for whatever reason so when Vicente gets back from his travels he will be powered up he will have to go against the royals.
ch 529 Lesson for Nina
Fantasy · RVN_1998
Who will you give the apple to? Oh great Paris of Troy
"We came to meet the supreme authority, His Holiness, but in his absence, please be the judge, Your Eminence," the leading woman, a blonde-haired, six-foot-tall goddess, said. Her words came out like songs of a cuckoo. "The eight of us are considered to be the most beautiful women in the entire Sol, but we seek to find out who is the most beautiful—please judge us, Your Eminence."
Fantasy · MisterImmortal
I just realized that yue li and Liyue is the same name just slightly changed and it’s kinda funny
While Yue Li and Liyue were busy cooking food and decorating tables. Han Li and his fat Father-in-law walked the roads in Starlight Zone silently, and soon, they were in a small seating area usually used by the kids around.
Eastern · FamishedGod
Y’all forgot to remove this
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Eastern · Aurelius_Imperator
Maybe it’s integrated assistant instead of artificial intelligence
And with a good reason, fortresses like the Flying Citadel had simplified version of a system, similar to what Karla did in Kerrol, it was obviously degraded, but still, it was something with an artificial system integrated, that's what the cores of the fortresses were, the "IA" of the fortress resided there.
Fantasy · Barion_Trident
He still has the undead repelling whip
"I'll grant you an undying body. Wherever the night goes, you'll live endlessly and be indestructible!"
Games · The Key In 10 Years
An old archmage has a stronger body than a dude who plants trees for a hobby? Does each rank up make your body stronger or is it just an increase in lifespan and Ronan’s hobby is squats bench and deadlifts
She gently bit her lower lip and reminded him, "You'd better stuff a few more insoles into your shoes. I remember that Ronan is a few centimetres taller than you, and his body is also a little stronger than yours. But it doesn't matter. Anyway, you'll have a cloak to help cover it up later."
Games · The Key In 10 Years
According to what the author said a couple of chapters back the intelligence stat doesn’t really work like that I think it’s potential intelligence instead of actual usable intelligence
I confronted my aunt and managed to get her to confess. She revealed all the things my uncle had done. The reason I never received any allowance was because of his orders. It turns out my aunt wasn't the one cutting corners – he was the mastermind behind it all.
Urban · InnocentFox
Can he use .5 instead of a full point?
"I should have joined those networking schemes that sell those detox products. I could have been the living proof, and made a lot of money!" I quipped, letting out a chuckle. But deep down, am I really joking? I mean, with my evolving suggestion skill, I could probably sell sand in a desert. Networking scams might just be the ticket to making a fortune. For now, I'll just jot down that, uh, "interesting" idea.
Urban · InnocentFox
In her “shoes”
Jason knew that Gaia could just use fear to motivate him into doing what she wanted. if he were in her shows, then that is exactly what he would have done. But he didn't think that she would do that. Jason easily dismantled Gaia's personality type in the few minutes that they were talking and he knew that she was not the sort to resort to something so sinister. She was too gentle and she didn't have the sadistic streak that would allow her to use constant fear to motivate him.
Fantasy · D_RegalInsomniac
I think cleavage is already plural because it means breasts so writing cleavages is a little redundant
'Get back in here, you fucking bastard,' Jason thought in annoyance and the heart of darkness preened rebelliously as it went to rest in between Gaia's exposed cleavages. The soft breasts jiggled once the Heart of Darkness landed in her bountiful valleys. Gaia smiled down at it and pet it gently and Jason felt his eye twitch, 'Fucking traitor.'
Fantasy · D_RegalInsomniac
“Against” her soft skin
"But you have this precious little thing," Gaia stretched out her palm and a black ball floated out from my chest and towards her. She gently guided it to her face and it nuzzled gains her soft skin. Jason looked at the Heart of Darkness like it was a traitor. Jason could still feel his connection to the heart, so he knew that it only came out temporarily.
Fantasy · D_RegalInsomniac
“Jason’s” face
Moments passed in the void as the two of them just looked at each other without a word before a small smile began to creep onto Json's face. He chuckled sinisterly and leaned forward, "You can't, can you?" he grinned in amusement, "You just can't kill me! Why is that? The great and almighty mother of earth can't kill me - a mere mortal. That doesn't seem right!"
Fantasy · D_RegalInsomniac
“Jason” just narrowed
Gaia bowed her head slightly to Jason to show how grateful she was, but Jaosn just narrowed his eyes at her as his mind raced. Gaia was leaving out something very important in her description of what just happened, "I have been having a vague thought about this for a while. Isn't this just a game to the both of you?" Gaia stiffened a little and Jason narrowed his eyes, "An intergalactic cluster of planets ruled over by two celestials, and all of the planets possess a champion that they use to represent the whole planet. If the champion of one planet is defeated by the champion of any other planet, then the spoils will go to the celestial overseeing the victor," Jason leaned in angrily, "You're not even trying to hide your own greed. You just want to defeat him, don't you?"
Fantasy · D_RegalInsomniac
“Hand” to his face
A bright light appeared over his head immediately afterward and Jason put his head to his face and looked up while squinting. There was nothing up there except for the light and it increased in intensity until Jason could no longer keep his eyes open and he vanished from the floor.
Fantasy · D_RegalInsomniac
“Split up with” would fit better here
Vicente narrowed his eyes and changed the subject. "After I broke up with Layla and Casey, I discovered The Vile Altar in the Kenyth Empire. That's where I found Onyx and the artifacts I brought with me."
Taking the Mafia to the Magic World
Fantasy · RVN_1998