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This is a fantastic story I am hooked🤟

Wei bought an ox cart where is it. Why didn't they use their own it's supposed to be parked in front of the house. Why get someone else cart and why don't they use they animals they have to pull goods.

No proof reading and have not read your comments as a writer you should be able to grow from your experiences. I hope you have time to fix this so too enhance your book and readers views.

cool the dad was there fishing too

Well I think that's a little crazy he was a Virgin when he slept with xia ru but now he is a rapist of so many women why?

It is a good read thank you, but all you ask for is gifts! You want, you want, you want. No mention of a thanks or hope you enjoy a very negative atmosphere from the author.

Really enjoy this book

In the previous chapter 234 class mate Han has one daughter and one son why did it change?

In the previous chapter class mate Han had one daughter who is spoiled and one son that is always left at home. Why the change?

Oreo is a girl yet you refer to her as a him a couple of times this is confusing. Hope you get it fixed. Love the book 😃