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the plot definitely has some potential however, the pacing is killing me and... the characters. what happened to the characters so far, I can't seem to feel like the characters are alive they lack personality another thing is it feels like the plot if forced there are too many coincidences for which some are explained but they still lack some sense for me also, what happened to Vorden's personality? did the author decided to turn down hid obsessiveness because of the reader's comments?

This novel is one of the best I have read. The plot, the characters, the pacing, the cliffhangers! It's unlike other novels where I can predict very accurately what will happen or what the next arc will be. The Author's POV amazingly written. I just finished reading 3 volumes of this book and, wow! The author really got me hooked. Although the first volume may be a little slow for some, it is definitely understandable since most of the world building is introduced there. Don't worry because the second and third volume will surely keep you on your toes. I'm looking forward to the next volumes! Thank You Entrail_Ji-nim!

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