Sorry :( recently been trying to improve further so I've been gaining 'insights' (reading novels) recently. My motivation for this novel isn't to gain popularity, but to craft a beautiful story whilst improving my writing skills. But I don't want to neglect my readers either ;-; I'll just try my best!
ch 68 Battle Erupts
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You're right. I leave readers in the dark too much. Mc's soul splitting indeed has something to do with the cure :) (Also, if you read the end of chapter 60, it may have been more clear. However, its unrealistic to expect readers to remember every paragraph)
ch 61 Soul Vessel
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Good point. It was a typo.
ch 53 Mysterious Technique
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Growing a tree that yields enough wood is a lengthy endeavor and not worth the effort. Instead, waiting for the system to respawn trees would be more efficient. At least for now...
Simon suddenly saw another two icons on the top of his vision and took a deep breath.
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My original inspiration, believe it or not :)
It was truly a surreal sight; the sky surrounding him seemed to be like an infinite void, capable of engulfing anything and everything within its boundless depths. It was such a profound scene of nothingness, that it left a deep impression upon his heart.
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Don't worry, coming soon will be some of that action :) I feel you.
ch 41 Research Trial
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In this story, an integral part is MC's interaction with science and the real world - the collision of magic and science. Though it may be true that this novel may be tackling too many things at once, it unfortunately (or not) is the case. Even so, I respect your decision. Though I wouldn't call it an "arc", it doesn't even last 10 chapters :)
ch 39 The Life of a Scholar
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gotchu gimme 5 mins bro
ch 33 Veracity City
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Absolutely. Will fix
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From the perspective of the writer, I wholeheartedly agree with this review.
Only time will tell... (Next chapter)
ch 21 Off to the Ruins?
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Answering this question fully is a MAJOR spoiler. So I'll answer it partially, which is only a minor spoiler. All elements combined contribute to knowledge regarding matter as a whole. Therefore, it isn't exactly an element, but rather a type of magic that can be used with multiple elements in conjunction. Thus, it is given its own skill, even if it doesn't make an elemental star as one of the seven elements.
[Matter Sovereign] (II)(Lv. 2)
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"In total, the cost of this room had to be at least 500,000 F-Credits, which is the equivalent to nearly 10 times the annual salary of an average worker in the city." - chapter 2 of the novel. Do what you will with this information :)
Using this room came with a 250 F-Credit fee per hour of use, but was well worth the hefty price tag, as it had everything from shooting ranges to sports courses.
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Thank you for your insights. Most likely, replacing foraging with gathering would be better for clarity, while the farming skill not showing up in his most recent stat page was a complete oversight on my part. Great catches! As for the stats that showed as 0%, I assume that you are talking about Jake's stats. In that case, it is because he has awakened his talent as a mage. The system does not display areas of the stat pages that are not relevant to the character, but magic is relevant to him even though he does not technically have progress into magic just yet (His mana core is fully functional, thus unlocking that part of his stats).
ch 16 Not Your Average Joe
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Serves to demonstrate Kenny's wealth and reinforce the Mc's situation as a transmigrator :) Could have been excessive though.
It sported an exterior that was a deep blue color with a black tint - a color which was almost comparable to navy blue. More importantly, it had a futuristic, slick, and luxurious design - with a performance that matched its stunning appearance.
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Fair point! I will include that he was testing the waters for clarification.
ch 0 8 Preparing the Land
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Coming back soon :)
ch 76 Misc Details Sheet
Island Ascension Online
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