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He might lose all his gold this time.....

Ajax low cultivation is annoying me as well. He needs to catch up, inspite of his trump cards and abilities.

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I cant wait for Rain to learn the truth about her relationship with Sunny. I'm on pins & needles!

She won't be breathing for long then.....

Why does the character have to check his status so frequently? Unless he meditated or used a treasure its ridiculous. What could of changed from morning to noon? Love the story regardless.

He has time to pay rent, but he doesn't have stable income, also he's still in school. How will this change?

If he thought more with the head on his shoulders, than between his legs he would of hit lvl 40. His cultivation & sexual appetite is not as balanced as he thinks. He needs to separate from Ruth for a bit and enter that spacial kingdom.

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This character is truly naive, and down right foolish. He wouldn't be so weak, and loss of HP, if he eats his enemies. He could of powered up ages ago.

Why do you let Gary keep getting into these situations. He starting to be more brawn than brain. He deserves to lose this fight.

I'm so sorry to hear about your health problems. glad your recovering. I love your imagination and storytelling, and characters. I hope you continue writing. Don't let negative people, and comments affect your passion and creativity. Even if you stop this body of work, I thank you for the body of work you blessed me with. As an avid reader I am pleased.

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I'm reading the comments and I'm feeling the same. What happened to the runes?

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I like your spin on Natasha. Potential for a good villianess.

I was hoping Shay would let his rich egotism, and vr knowledge cause him to spiral out of control. I wanted him to become a dark nemesis to Zach eventually.

Gary needs to learn that being a werewolf doesn't make him invincible. I would love for Kai to be turned, but I think it would make Gary obsolete.