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shaddohh

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2021-04-17 Joined United States

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I disagree that you need to add more day-to-day stuff and I vehemently disagree that he is too OP. This is a power fantasy that doesn't waste time getting bogged down by minutiae. The only thing missing is more chapters, the current ones are perfectly fine.

Releases will be paused for now since I'm still working on the background stuff and I would like to rewrite some of the chapters in the vault section since I'm not happy with what I've written and I think some of them aren't really needed. I also think at this point more of the mc's day-to-day should had been written about since I've been getting an influx of people commenting that the mc didn't work/struggled for anything he achieved/has so I'll add some chapters with him working on different things I guess. Though I may just end up dropping it since the fic's been dying and I've been losing motivation to write it.

Fallout Wastelander

Fallout Wastelander

Video Games · PowerArmorGuy

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Item Description: A massive 6-foot long, 1-foot wide, and 3 inches thick two-handed double-sided chainsword with large hardened saw teeth installed to rip and tear while also being powered by a single microfusion breeder cell. This weapon can cleave through steel like a hot knife through butter but one has to be able to handle the weapon's weight for that to be possible. Designed by Harold Todd Woods.

Fallout Wastelander

Fallout Wastelander

Video Games · PowerArmorGuy

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As a hobbyist writer myself, I can say with certainty that I would never publicize anything I wasn't committed to keeping in my story. Then again, I prefer to plan out the entire story from beginning to end before writing a single chapter, so the circumstances are certainly different. Considering that you are writing this chapter by chapter, you may find that you want to do a rewrite of some parts to better fit with new ideas you have later, so don't rule out changing anything entirely either. In either case you should never let others determine your own creative vision. Let them give suggestions but never let them make the final decision. It's your story so only you can decide what works best in the end.

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Don't know if you've decided already, but please don't make Elise a spy. She would be perfect as a yandere love interest for Daniel. Just gotta give some messed up reasons for her joining Team Rocket and her success at raising Fearow to put the icing on the crazy cake.

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I always thought Diablo was a terrible name considering that he was supposed to be the Archdemon of Black. Something like Noir or Nocturnal would make more sense, in my opinion, but it seems no one else agrees. Oh well 🤷🏻‍♂️

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