Kaazy

Kaazy

14d

Commented

Youve made me obsessed with your novel. Damn you!

ch 1203 The Other Self

Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy

Games · Snoring_Panda

Kaazy

2yr

Commented

Maybe add a last name? More character development?

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Kaazy

2yr

Commented

Delete the Sei.

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Kaazy

2yr

Commented

I know you have a lot of question, but now is not the time. ~I believe would sound much more endangering and cause more interest.

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Kaazy

2yr

Commented

I recommend rewording this paragraph.. It makes the humanoid speech sound like a child which I don’t believe that’s what youre aiming for.

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Kaazy

2yr

Commented

I recommend changing how was to how is. It’ll read more smoothly. Sorry I’ll be posting these comments throughout, once I get my power stones tonight I’ll send them your way. 🤙

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Kaazy

2yr

Commented

Change Best to Vest, so far the story is intriguing so keep up the good work. 👍

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Kaazy

2yr

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Dragon

ch 0 1 01. Birth

Birth of the Demonic Sword

Eastern · Eveofchaos

Kaazy

2yr

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Luxury car

ch 0 1 01. Birth

Birth of the Demonic Sword

Eastern · Eveofchaos

Kaazy

2yr

Commented

Please release more chapters today, I need more to feel okay.

ch 1652 Blood brothers forever

My Vampire System

Fantasy · JKSManga

Kaazy

2yr

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

ch 0 1 A New Beginning

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Kaazy

2yr

Commented

Noah?

The Creator Skill gave Noah the power to, well, create things.

My World Traveling System: The Harbinger of Death

Fantasy · PancakesWitch

Kaazy

2yr

Commented

Never ask mentIon? Remove the ask when ya have the time:)

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The Bloodline System

Fantasy · TimVic

Kaazy

2yr

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Tragedy

Blood Evolution System

Fantasy · Crimson_ink

Kaazy

2yr

Replied to Crimson_ink

Of course, I’ll update my review the more I read.

Blood Evolution System

Fantasy · Crimson_ink

Kaazy

2yr

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire

ch 50 Chapter 50: The third assessment!

Blood Evolution System

Fantasy · Crimson_ink

Kaazy

2yr

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ring

ch 50 Chapter 50: The third assessment!

Review Change: this webnovel 100% has the capability to stand side by side with the other top webnovels (for example, My Vampire System). the novel has a few grammer mistakes but that doesnt affect the meaning behind the paragraph the author is trying to express. Overall this webnovel is already in my top 10 favorites and i greatly urge new readers to give the webnovel 10 chapters before writing it off and you’ll be hooked. In all honestly, the biggest write off for most is the amount of chapters a webnovel has but if you give this one a chance, you wont regret it. Once the webnovel has a little over 200 chapters, I bet it’ll be a top webnovel as it rightfully deserves. That’s all from me. 🤙