The grammar is quite decent and the story is interesting. It seems that the author is an experienced writer and have read a lot of novels. Just make some more descriptions about the characters. I barely imagine what they look like, but it gives hints as I read more. Keep it up! This story will top, I'm sure of it!
Fantasy · saragnayon_
The novel has great potential due to its catchy prologue. Added this already on my library!
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The grammar is quite decent and the story is interesting. It seems that the author is an experienced writer and have read a lot of novels. Just make some more descriptions about the characters. I barely imagine what they look like, but it gives hints as I read more. Keep it up! This story will top, I'm sure of it!
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Fantasy · saragnayon_