personally option 1, you've done remarkably well so far with only a few rough edges that you can work on in the future. but if you're going to make the fic a single love interest, maybe go Kyoka or Melissa, i think that Momo is overdone as the LI in the ff community.
ch 30 Another update :)
Anime & Comics · TenseiNovels
thanks, looks like Trigons gonna show up soon
The storefront exploded sending shrapnel and debris flying everywhere. Mark pushed Gary to the ground and stood in front of them all, the debris he expected to pierce his skin bounced off him easily much to his surprise. 'I have more abilities than healing it seems...' he thought to himself.
Anime & Comics · TheManUnderTheBed
can we get a picture of the necklace?
The storefront exploded sending shrapnel and debris flying everywhere. Mark pushed Gary to the ground and stood in front of them all, the debris he expected to pierce his skin bounced off him easily much to his surprise. 'I have more abilities than healing it seems...' he thought to himself.
Anime & Comics · TheManUnderTheBed
Francis. G .Castle stepped out of the helicopter in full SWAT gear as he took in the destruction before him.
Anime & Comics · Marine0IQ
For those who don't know, Zoom's real identity is Hunter Zolomon of Earth 2
"I'm Dr. Zolomon and this is my colleague, Dr. Martinez. It's a pleasure to have you here Dr. Snow." The man greeted with a glowing smile.
Movies · 75BlackFlames
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Anime & Comics · Silverfang
I see, thanks!
The child was an orphan, a Ring fighter, a Police Force officer, Maruboshi Kosuke's protegee—which was more surprising than anything—he was even learning genjutsu from Uchiha Mikoto and had managed to dispatch three similarly aged ROOT trainees who had gone through intense for almost a decade.
Anime & Comics · FictionOnlyReader
isn't it supposed to say "four similarly aged ROOT trainees"
The child was an orphan, a Ring fighter, a Police Force officer, Maruboshi Kosuke's protegee—which was more surprising than anything—he was even learning genjutsu from Uchiha Mikoto and had managed to dispatch three similarly aged ROOT trainees who had gone through intense for almost a decade.
Anime & Comics · FictionOnlyReader
not every reincarnated person has a cool name, just sayin
3. Don't care
Anime & Comics · Marveller
I'm saying "plus 1" but it's not showing up...
What mutants do you guys want to see? Try not to say the obvious ones like Wolverine or Professor X... obviously they're in. The main stays are in.
Anime & Comics · LordOrpheus
plus 1
What mutants do you guys want to see? Try not to say the obvious ones like Wolverine or Professor X... obviously they're in. The main stays are in.
Anime & Comics · LordOrpheus
1
What mutants do you guys want to see? Try not to say the obvious ones like Wolverine or Professor X... obviously they're in. The main stays are in.
Anime & Comics · LordOrpheus
Elixir or Domino
What mutants do you guys want to see? Try not to say the obvious ones like Wolverine or Professor X... obviously they're in. The main stays are in.
Anime & Comics · LordOrpheus
1
Was this dropped?
ch 0 4 Chapter 3: First Steps
Anime & Comics · Feniurme
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The Immortal in Star Wars
Anime & Comics · DaoistRUH792