Gorama_27

9d

Commented

ch 64 Chapter 64 The Sea King Tide

The Reincarnator's Tavern

Movies · GnomeBob

Gorama_27

1mth

Commented

Captain John hid his treasure underwater, which is one of the reasons for Buggy's hatred towards Shank when he ate his devil fruit. He couldn't get the treasure because he couldn't swim. It is illogical that Captain John is a devil fruit user. This is a part that is wrong if you want to stay true to canon.

ch 15 Bounty

One Piece: Build The Strongest Beast Pirates

Anime & Comics · 0StolenDream0

Gorama_27

2mth

Replied to Dreamer_1297

So what would you do in his place?

ch 77 Chapter 77

Naruto: Monthly Refreshing Passive System

Anime & Comics · Zaelum

Gorama_27

2mth

Commented

Author is it possible to answer if the story is abandoned or still in Hiatsu.

ch 64 Hiatus and New Story Sample

The Reincarnator's Tavern

Movies · GnomeBob

Gorama_27

2mth

Posted

I read until chapter 21 and I gave up because it's not interesting that the mc is too op too quickly. I liked the concept but I think it would have taken more time for the mc to reach the level of seal master. As advice, to follow a more realistic growth curve, aiming for a level similar to Itachi Uchiha will be good. Both are geniuses and have kekkai gekkai that works with Yin Realease.

Naruto : Shadows of Resurgence

Anime & Comics · Silent_stiele

Gorama_27

2mth

Posted

Ce n'est pas l'auteur original. C'est une copie de la fanfic Sunrise (Quentyn Martell Si) de W1ngs sur fanfiction.net. C'est plutôt honteux qu'il y a rien dans le synopsis indiquant que c'est une fanfiction écrit par une autre personne. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

GOT: Reborn as a Martell

Book&Literature · MoonLight18

Gorama_27

2mth

Commented

When Valeria become Queen?

ch 49 -Chapter 45-

Aegon Snow

Book&Literature · Ghostrider0002

Gorama_27

4mth

Commented

I vote Thalia

ch 38 A Spear Boy Gains A Rather Devoted(Yandere) Fan

Spear Boy Gets Creative (Cao Cao SI) DXD Multicross Story

Anime & Comics · EzioAuditore_1

Gorama_27

5mth

Posted

The quality of the translation is good, but the story is garbage. He is an overpower mc who gains his power without any work. Additionally, the Ushiogakure and Mist War is poorly done with little strategic action and the global context of the story is poorly represented. Furthermore, I'm not a fan of the fights, I find them too poorly done. There is too much arrogance everywhere as if everyone is a Chinese sect master.

I, Naruto's Uncle, Am Really Invincible

Anime & Comics · Nobody2NoBody

Gorama_27

6mth

Commented

The chapter is a failure, I didn't really have fun reading it and it's hard to understand the mc's point of view. I hope the new race is better written.

ch 13 Chapter 13: Another Round of Hell and A New Race

DXD: Revenge of the forgotten

Anime & Comics · Ahilash_Danie

Gorama_27

7mth

Commented

I really like the story. On the other hand, I'm curious to know if you're going to make any big changes to the story now that Leylin will soon become a magus.

ch 104 True Friend

Warlock of the Magus World – Redux

Anime & Comics · TunaSandwichAddict

Gorama_27

8mth

Commented

Vers good chapter

ch 63 Chapter 63: give me the evidence I will investigate it for you…

Villain Starts with the Naruto World

Anime & Comics · souryourer

Gorama_27

8mth

Commented

I noticed an inconsistency. Naruto in Shippuden he is between 15 and 17 years old. The mc is 1 year older than Naruto, so he should be 16.

ch 27 Time Skip

Naruto: Reduce All Creation to Ash

Anime & Comics · Palpable_Banana

Gorama_27

8mth

Commented

I think the first arc you should do is a conflict arc with team rocket. Because I think that it would be necessary to protect its territory before the great war so that the mc can fight without the team rocket taking advantage of it to make a mess.

ch 192 Suggestion

Pokemon : Aura of Darkness

Anime & Comics · Immortle_diablo123

Gorama_27

9mth

Commented

Do you intend to keep the same frequency of publication? Because you took almost 1 year to finish chapter 5.1 to 5.6, it's very long.

ch 48 Chapter 5.6: The Force Shall Free me

Star Wars: Wrath of The Force

Video Games · Zevren

Gorama_27

9mth

Commented

Is this fanfiction abandoned?

ch 64 Hiatus and New Story Sample

The Reincarnator's Tavern

Movies · GnomeBob

Gorama_27

9mth

Commented

I'm a little disappointed that Cao Cao came and managed to hurt Serafall. I find the scenario superficial, because I have the impression that it is too forced so that it makes another voyage in time.

ch 38 Ambush

DXD: A Nexus Devil (DXD x Multi-Crossover)

Anime & Comics · FiveStarTomato

Gorama_27

9mth

Commented

I'm sick of following your One Piece fanfics only to have you delete them every time. I stop following his One Piece fanfic even though I really like your writing style and your fanfiction. Thank you for the good time I spent following your stories.

ch 31 ANNOUNCEMENT!!!