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MelBri

MelBri

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Wow!...and then you ruined it...

After finishing his sentence, Zhang Wei's gaze fleetingly swept over Xia Qianyue's somewhat modest chest, thinking it was a pity, no one's perfect...

Are You Crazy? He's only an Intern Lawyer?

Are You Crazy? He's only an Intern Lawyer?

Urban · Some Dog

MelBri
MelBri
MelBri
Replied to Stanky5187

Ikr?

"Yes, boss, I have acquired the item, hmm, yes, the owner of the villa is right beside me, a nobody. Understood, I will take care of it cleanly..."

Are You Crazy? He's only an Intern Lawyer?

Are You Crazy? He's only an Intern Lawyer?

Urban · Some Dog

MelBri
Replied to Stanky5187

I'm sure they do!

"It's unbelievable that Lawyer Zhang Qiansheng has defeated the Procuratorate again, clearing Li Fuwen of murder charges. With this victory, could Lawyer Zhang have reached 3000 career wins?"

Are You Crazy? He's only an Intern Lawyer?

Are You Crazy? He's only an Intern Lawyer?

Urban · Some Dog

MelBri
Replied to Stanky5187

No, the author probably meant a paralegal.

If he hadn't chosen to be a lawyer, but rather a legal worker, earning less money, perhaps his family would have been happy and content, arriving home to his wife's delicious cooking every day, and his daughter would happily call him daddy, enjoying the joys of family life.

Are You Crazy? He's only an Intern Lawyer?

Are You Crazy? He's only an Intern Lawyer?

Urban · Some Dog

MelBri
MelBri
Commented

Correction: "...laid inside a coffin for hours..."

"That would not have worked. He was a public figure, and his funeral would have been a public affair. He stopped going outside due to fear. Do you really think he would have lied inside a coffin without fidgeting for hours?" replied Zion.

I Spy Two Haters/Lovers

I Spy Two Haters/Lovers

Urban · DaoistxYTRJ0

MelBri
Commented

Correction, "He, too, was scared of the assassin." or "He was also scared of the assassin." or "He was scared of the assassin, too."

Zion gulped. The fear was visible on his face. He too was scared of the assassin. "No, at first, he was a little scared because someone tried to defy his reign of terror. He was terrified after what happened to his car."

I Spy Two Haters/Lovers

I Spy Two Haters/Lovers

Urban · DaoistxYTRJ0

MelBri
Commented

Correction: Leave out the comma after "audio".

Archer kept staring at him with widened eyes and open mouth. He knew the audio, the FBI was receiving right now would explode everything. There would be chaos in the field office.

I Spy Two Haters/Lovers

I Spy Two Haters/Lovers

Urban · DaoistxYTRJ0

MelBri
Commented

Correction: "...The Don has really died."

"So, after the car toppled, the driver pulled him out somehow. They hid behind the car and waited to hear if another hail of bullets would come their way. But there was silence, dead silence. They had no idea that the killer had already done his job. He had killed my father with the poison. When nothing was heard for minutes, the driver hijacked a car and drove my father home. No one chased after them, no one followed them which was bizarre. The killer was so confident that he didn't even try to check if Don has really died," narrated Zion.

I Spy Two Haters/Lovers

I Spy Two Haters/Lovers

Urban · DaoistxYTRJ0

MelBri
Commented

Correction: "...The Don.." Without the "The" before ("The Don"), it would just be "don", without capitalization. Your program might be autocorrecting, since "don" is also a common name from previous generations.

"Well, he was rattled after that. No one ever tried to do such a thing to him ever in his life. He was the boss, he was the Don yet someone tried to take him out. He was scared to see the marksmanship of the assassin," said Zion.

I Spy Two Haters/Lovers

I Spy Two Haters/Lovers

Urban · DaoistxYTRJ0

MelBri
Commented

Correction: "He wanted to meet with the person to learn from him, but at the same time..."

"Have you noticed any tall buildings near that crossroad? There is no vantage point for an assassin to set up near that place. And the constant traffic, all day long. No one can anticipate which car will cross at what time. I just proved that to you," shouted Archer. He was shocked to his core. If such an assassin was really alive, he must be an expert and someone to be feared. He never wanted to meet with the person to learn from him but at the same time, his soul was shivering with fear.

I Spy Two Haters/Lovers

I Spy Two Haters/Lovers

Urban · DaoistxYTRJ0

MelBri
Commented

Correction: "The driver tried to control the car after the bullet shot, but ..."

"No one knows but his two bodyguards who always rode with him were dead, shot in the head, direct hit, absolute bullseye. The tires of the car had bullet holes, the windshield had bullet holes. The driver tried to control the car after the bullet shot but the car toppled and hence the accident," explained Zion.

I Spy Two Haters/Lovers

I Spy Two Haters/Lovers

Urban · DaoistxYTRJ0

MelBri
Commented

Corrections: "There was no evidence..." "There were bullet holes, but no bullets." "... ,but no one believed it..."

Zion kept narrating, "there was no evidence that my father was ever shot. There were bullet holes but no bullets. We only had circumstantial evidence. No matter how many times Theo told NYPD and the DA that it was an assassination no one believed it as we had no evidence and the victim, my father, was nowhere to be found. The DA refused to pursue this case."

I Spy Two Haters/Lovers

I Spy Two Haters/Lovers

Urban · DaoistxYTRJ0

MelBri
Commented

Correction: "The FBI ... , too."

The vanishing of the bullets triggered Archer's memory. The FBI too took care of all the bullets when they staged the killing of Zion. Did the FBI have something to do with the assassination of Zachary? But that was against the law. No one can, no, no one must kill a person, no matter what the justification, that would be cold-blood murder.

I Spy Two Haters/Lovers

I Spy Two Haters/Lovers

Urban · DaoistxYTRJ0

MelBri
Commented

Correction: "The bullets from the bodyguards' bodies, too, vanished, ..."

"The car that he was travelling in, that toppled on the road, that had bullet holes was towed to a garage under NYPD's supervision, but that car never reached that garage. No one knows what happened to the car. Hell, the bullets found in the car that was in police custody vanished. The media has a photo of a man towing the car from the road but after that, no one knows. The bullet extracted from the bodyguards' body too vanished from the ME's office," said Zion.

I Spy Two Haters/Lovers

I Spy Two Haters/Lovers

Urban · DaoistxYTRJ0

MelBri
Commented

Correction: "...in police custody, vanished."

"The car that he was travelling in, that toppled on the road, that had bullet holes was towed to a garage under NYPD's supervision, but that car never reached that garage. No one knows what happened to the car. Hell, the bullets found in the car that was in police custody vanished. The media has a photo of a man towing the car from the road but after that, no one knows. The bullet extracted from the bodyguards' body too vanished from the ME's office," said Zion.

I Spy Two Haters/Lovers

I Spy Two Haters/Lovers

Urban · DaoistxYTRJ0

MelBri
Commented

Correction: "A killer that would instill fear into the heart of a don would be worth meeting."

"What happened to his car?" Archer leaned forward in his chair. The story was getting more interesting with every passing minute. Now, he wanted to find that killer at any cost. A killer that would instil fear in heart of a Don was worth meeting. He must have been amazingly trained for making such killer shots.

I Spy Two Haters/Lovers

I Spy Two Haters/Lovers

Urban · DaoistxYTRJ0

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