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MelBri

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2021-04-22 Joined Global

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He's gonna have a silly grin on his face ALL DAY long!!
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"Right! Right! See you in the afternoon," said Kyung-Soo and left the room with his hands over his heart. "Ah…" he cried happily. "She said yes, she said yes, YES!!!" he waved his hands in the air in happiness and looked at the heavens as if he won the lottery.

To Kiss An Idol

To Kiss An Idol

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"Um… about us… dating," she tried hiding her smile but could not contain it.

To Kiss An Idol

To Kiss An Idol

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Correction: "It was not an urgent kiss or even a passionate one, but a sweet one."

True, she kissed Young-Chul and Korain but, on their cheeks, but she kissed him on his lips. It was not an urgent kiss or passionate one but a sweet one. It showed her feelings. It showed her heart. He was so angry with the turn of events in the K&Q building but after her kiss his heart melted.

To Kiss An Idol

To Kiss An Idol

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Correction: end with ?

Kyung-Soo opened the door and left her alone. His heart was pounding in his chest. She kissed him, she kissed him!!! He was on the moon dancing his heart out. She too felt something for him, he was sure. Why else would she kiss him, that too on his lips. 

To Kiss An Idol

To Kiss An Idol

Urban · DaoistxYTRJ0

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Correction: "He was on top of the moon, dancing..."

Kyung-Soo opened the door and left her alone. His heart was pounding in his chest. She kissed him, she kissed him!!! He was on the moon dancing his heart out. She too felt something for him, he was sure. Why else would she kiss him, that too on his lips. 

To Kiss An Idol

To Kiss An Idol

Urban · DaoistxYTRJ0

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Correction: "...was the one who stopped kissing first."

Nivritti was the one who initiated the kiss, and she was the one stopped kissing first, but she didn't shy away. She just smiled at Kyung-Soo and said, "thank you!"

To Kiss An Idol

To Kiss An Idol

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Corrections: "...and the room filled with a sweet smell of love." "Kyung-Soo's hands were swollen now, but ..."

Both forgot about their pain or that Korain was waiting downstairs. The sounds of kisses filled the room. Rose petals started falling down on them and the room filled with sweet smell of love. Kyung-Soo's hands were swelled now but he didn't mind that. All he wanted was that kiss, the kiss Nivritti initiated.

To Kiss An Idol

To Kiss An Idol

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Corrections: "His heart, Nivritti, was close to his actual heart, safe and sound, and he wanted nothing else."

He moved her hand away from him leaving her perplexed. Did her hug didn't calm him down, she thought? But the next moment, Kyung-Soo pulled her closer to himself and hid her head in his chest. He held her as tightly as he could. His heart, Nivritti, was close to his heart, safe and sound and he wanted nothing else.

To Kiss An Idol

To Kiss An Idol

Urban · DaoistxYTRJ0

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Corrections: "He moved her hand away, leaving her perplexed." "Did her hug not calm him down, she thought?"

He moved her hand away from him leaving her perplexed. Did her hug didn't calm him down, she thought? But the next moment, Kyung-Soo pulled her closer to himself and hid her head in his chest. He held her as tightly as he could. His heart, Nivritti, was close to his heart, safe and sound and he wanted nothing else.

To Kiss An Idol

To Kiss An Idol

Urban · DaoistxYTRJ0

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Corrections: "Her touch was like a wonder to him", or "Her touch was wonderful to him." "How he fell for a kind girl, he had no idea.", or "How did he fall for a kind girl, he had no idea."

Her touch was like wonder to him. He snaked his hands over her hands and closed his eyes. He sighed with relief when he felt the warmth emanating from her body. She was hurt yet she was thinking about him, which warmed his heart. How did his heart fell for a kind girl, he had no idea.

To Kiss An Idol

To Kiss An Idol

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Correction: "...and hugged him from behind".

He jerked away his kurta unknowingly and moved towards the door in anger. Nivritti had seen how badly his hands were injured. She didn't want him to get hurt even more. She ran to him and wrapped her arms around him and hugged him from back. She placed her head on his back and held him tightly.

To Kiss An Idol

To Kiss An Idol

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Correction: If worn with pajamas, dhoti pants, or churidaar pants, I think of the kurta as more of a tunic than a dress, but that's up to you. But whichever word you choose, keep only the "Indian" capitalized.

Nivritti contorted her face and was about to cry as he remembered what Ritvik was about to do to her. She trembled with fear and grabbed the sides of Kyung-Soo's Kurta (the Indian Dress he was wearing).

To Kiss An Idol

To Kiss An Idol

Urban · DaoistxYTRJ0

MelBri
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Correction: "Kurta" doesn't need to be capitalized here.

Nivritti contorted her face and was about to cry as he remembered what Ritvik was about to do to her. She trembled with fear and grabbed the sides of Kyung-Soo's Kurta (the Indian Dress he was wearing).

To Kiss An Idol

To Kiss An Idol

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Corrections: "...and if he was hitting someone, then that someone made a big mistake!" "What did Hyung see him do?"

"SK Hyung never hits anyone and if he was hitting someone, he made a big mistake. What did he do? what did hyung saw him do?" asked Kyung-Soo.

To Kiss An Idol

To Kiss An Idol

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