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This is going to be my second review, I'm going to write this one because it will contain spoilers and the other one doesn't, First of all, let's talk about the good things, Darya's character and everything that involves her was very good, I don't like her losing her memory and I don't like her. that she died, but they were good dramas; Another good thing was the innovative system that the author created, finally all the training and building of magical skills was also very good. Secondly, let's talk about the bad things (my outburst), there are a lot of errors in the numbers in history, whether in the system, in the size of things or in the speed at the end, but what really pisses me off are the errors in the system, which are constant, sometimes the MC is stronger than it should be, sometimes it's weaker, sometimes it just doesn't make sense, and I told, look, I told, almost everything; The second thing is the inconsistency in the power system, I said that I liked the system, right? So... it would have been perfect if the system was only for the MC, or just for some people, but due to the fact that it goes to all the people in the universe, it is very forced that the MC (a nobody, who is 22 years old) , did civil engineering, and was a bit of a geek, average intelligence, and extremely low creativity for someone who lived millennia) being stronger than everyone else, or always beating some people with a status that is above him, like, literally EVERYTHING abilities that he discovered, would have been discovered with a few decades of research, of a scientific society, with investment in research, the whole history of civilizations being relaxed between assimilation processes is extremely forced, people would still seek more strength by status, security or revenge against other people, countries would still do a lot of military research to become stronger, even without threat (look at the fucking bombs, every day we advance more in terms of our arsenal, the effect and effectiveness of them, even if we already we can destroy our planet several times), governments would still suffer attacks and threats of civil wars, with the sharing of information, it is impossible that the MC alone is stronger than some societies, which have evolved for centuries; The third thing I'm going to complain about is the webnovel's genre tags, it lacks the tragedy tag and has an extra romance tag, on the tragedy tag I'm just going to say that I started reading it not because of that, and if I knew the shit that it was going to happen, from the beginning, I wouldn't even have started it, as for the novel tag, I can only say that starting a michuuca novel towards the penultimate or last arc of the work (almost 700 chapters), does not make this webnovel a webnovel of the genre of romance, especially with this unhealthy and super uncomfortable romance; Fourth, I will simply comment that the entire resolution of the last arc of time travel, defeating the almost ''god'' of the work with the power of friendship, is super convenient, incoherent, being both a plot hole and plot armor; Finally, we have occasional inconsistencies, such as Netro's power of time, having spent 900 years on Earth, which does not match any calculation I make, Ilyana not doing the obvious to get her husband back and have a stronger ally, among others, which I won't comment on because I'm already tired. Finally, I can only say that maybe I'll give the author another chance on Unlimited Power 2, because there it's about an archer, and I've never seen a system story with the MC being an archer. But it will be the last chance I give to this author.

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