Deo_Du_toit

2yr

Posted

good read waiting for the plot twist cant say much as the story just started but from what I gathered the antidote being the blood type is a bit far fetched. but good story plot

Ãntidote

Realistic · Legacy_za

Deo_Du_toit

2yr

Replied to Kimberly_Erasmus

thank you for the summary

Desolate 2021

Realistic · Legacy_za

Deo_Du_toit

2yr

Posted

This story is exactly Kimberly stated a poor girl sounds like she has multiple personalities, I like the concept of the voices telling her things and it's her comfort but I won't go in a deserted house lol well done Author.

Desolate 2021

Realistic · Legacy_za

Deo_Du_toit

2yr

Commented

smart move young girl

"Let's hear if my mother will be ok with you standing here while I am dressing", "do not bother calling her I am leaving"

Desolate 2021

Realistic · Legacy_za

Deo_Du_toit

2yr

Commented

what a jerk

I left the TV on switch it off. Sir, I am tired, and it is late, so you indirectly telling me no, you would not check.

Desolate 2021

Realistic · Legacy_za

Deo_Du_toit

2yr

Commented

I am disliking this Scott character but we will see where it goes

ch 0 4 Chapter Three

Desolate 2021

Realistic · Legacy_za

Deo_Du_toit

2yr

Commented

I hate when men has that tendancy to abuse power

What happened to the one hand washing the other hand? "Excuse me?"

Desolate 2021

Realistic · Legacy_za

Deo_Du_toit

2yr

Commented

old f perve

"The one hand washes the other hand"

Desolate 2021

Realistic · Legacy_za

Deo_Du_toit

2yr

Commented

awkward

Jamie now sits by the table as Scott starts a conversation about her clothing design and her ambition.

Desolate 2021

Realistic · Legacy_za

Deo_Du_toit

2yr

Commented

brave little girl to put her mom's happiness first

She could see her mother is happy, and that is all that mattered she kept telling herself, So what's for dinner said Jamie, I made some macaroni says Scott,

Desolate 2021

Realistic · Legacy_za

Deo_Du_toit

2yr

Commented

lol Scott's generosity is fascinating

Jamie now laid n her bed on her stomach feet in the air, hey said Scott I am glad you settling in shout if you need anything, why does he enter the room without knocking she thought to her.

Desolate 2021

Realistic · Legacy_za

Deo_Du_toit

2yr

Commented

great start!

ch 0 3 Chapter Two

Desolate 2021

Realistic · Legacy_za

Deo_Du_toit

2yr

Commented

she took the initiative to make a Income it's admirable

The day went quite well; everyone in the Marketplace knew she was Diah, daughter and supported her by asking where her mother was. She explained that her mother was sick, and people felt sorry for her since they knew her financial situation. Evening came she came home. Her mother was asleep, she took the days takings and put them in a jar where they stashed their earnings in a cupboard, the next day, her mother asked her where she was, she said she was studying over at a friend was enough food supply.

Desolate 2021

Realistic · Legacy_za

Deo_Du_toit

2yr

Commented

unlike any other nice start

Unlike any other, Jamie grew up with a lot of friends, always loved by the community. Jamie was born and raised in Indonesia, where she did her schooling till grade 5; she quickly got along with people.