it had too many plot holes
" Well normally I would reincarnate you as a rich and famous person but for some reason you're different so I will give you two choices " the god said.
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I know thats why I gave up on this book
" Well normally I would reincarnate you as a rich and famous person but for some reason you're different so I will give you two choices " the god said.
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I see in you're book that you use ' when you supposed to use "
ch 0 7 Chapter 7: Gohan vs Raditz
Anime & Comics · LordPhenex026
tip: When people are talking use this " instead of '
ch 0 7 Chapter 7: Gohan vs Raditz
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thankyou
ch 0 1 Chapter 9 I .... passed but at what cost ?
Anime & Comics · jayden_darkside
yea
chapter 1 back story
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Read it again I rewrote it
ch 0 1 chapter 7 work
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thankyou for the comment I will improve soon
ch 0 1 chapter 7 work
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I should
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i did that because I did not want to make him too op
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I will just say like after a few weeks of trying she got pregnant somthing like that
ch 0 1 chapter 1 back story
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thank you
ch 0 1 Chapter 2 Wishes
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Thank you I think I will make it a custom character .
ch 0 1 chapter 1 back story
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I will give it some thought .
ch 0 1 chapter 1 back story
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you're back yes
ch 47 Leaving Konoha...
Action · Kurosawa_Taiki
welp its been I don't know how long but still nothing
ch 47 Leaving Konoha...
Action · Kurosawa_Taiki
can you pls go back to naruto
ch 0 5 Getting My Hero Suit Created
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didn't let it down he looked up and he got kicked in the side by surprise
ch 0 7 Chapter 7 We won ?
Son of Cooler (DB)
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