Heck yah , you have grown a bit jazz. Now don't get me started with the grammar, you have to put the dialogues inside quotations (" "). why do you forgot them?.
Had some parts were i can not understand , so hopefully you work on it. Other than that its a solid story. i am just trying to be honest here- no offence.
talk about bad parenting,
"I don't need a daughter nor a baby. I can't gain power with a baby like this, it will make the higher society and nobles laugh at me for this disgrace I bring upon them." In that moment the cards were turned and the question of the father side, was almost answered. The old mother stood up and placed the baby into a small basket, covered in warm fur and then approached the girl.
The heart of the marked
History · KaNaOl
hmh kind a funny , but the heroin seems like a strong person but the male lead is just suking up to her , which is not what i hoped for. lol apart from it ,its good .
I am straight , so this didn't relate to me ............... but it is a good story. i liked the work.......................................................
The Alpha's Hidden Lover
LGBT+ · DrAxy66