Amazing story but main character needs to face more hardships I know she doesn't get everything easy and all but she needs to improve her perspective by facing instances were even she realizes she can't escape it can add more tension and drama to your story it is very good and I like it keep up the amazing story can't wait for more[img=recommend]
Fantasy · lazy_wanderer
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Amazing story but main character needs to face more hardships I know she doesn't get everything easy and all but she needs to improve her perspective by facing instances were even she realizes she can't escape it can add more tension and drama to your story it is very good and I like it keep up the amazing story can't wait for more[img=recommend]
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Fantasy · lazy_wanderer