This book is amazing and I love the amount of effort the author put in to the book. It really pays off. The prose is magnificent and so are the characters and plot. Amazing job!
Fantasy 路 TheMortalGod
Wow. This is a book with lots of potential. I was absolutely drawn in through the world building and characters. The plot itself is absolutely reviting. Keep up the great work author!
Teen 路 Debbiejay
The prose is very good and so is the protagonist. The first chapter does a great job of drawing me in as a reader. Good job to the author and I wish you luck!!!
Fantasy 路 Okorie kenna
It's a very interesting read for sure. I would totally recommend this to anyone. The author has done a great job at writing the story and though the prose could use some editing, the overall plot and characters are amazing.
Sci-fi 路 Zoey McAuthor
Working on it rn, school can be very hectic haha. But thank you so much for the support, I really appreciate it.
Fantasy 路 Alima Mahazabin
This is the first time in a long time that I've felt compelled to read more than one chapter of a book that I've read on this platform. All tops to the author, this is a real gem.
History 路 Kiyah
It's definitely an interesting story, though I wish we knew a bit more about the characters. The prose is nice though a little bit confusing and some imagery could have also been added to draw the reader in more.
Fantasy 路 Marikit
Great job! Love the character design and plot, the dialogue could use a bit of tweaking but otherwise, the story is great! Keep up the great work!
Teen 路 ibbygal
The characters and plot are very intriguing, though the grammar could use a little tweaking, that is my only problem. Overall, the story is very interesting and I give tops to the author for the creativity of this piece.
Fantasy 路 KoreRose_
Omg, this book is just great. I love the prose and everything and the characters do a great job of drawing me in with their personalities and dialogue. Keep up the great work!
LGBT+ 路 Laiba
OOOOOOOOOFFFFFF This book is amazing and I can't wait for newer chapters to arrive. There's just so much potential here!! Author, keep up the good work and good job!!
Fantasy 路 Namulindwa_Melissa
Such a great book!! I love the characters and the world-setting and plot is 馃憣馃憣馃憣馃憣馃憣馃憣. Great job!! Keep up the amazing work [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Fantasy 路 Leon_Kingraph
Interesting story with a great cast and plot! I love the imagery and personalities of the characters! Great jod, author! Keep up the good work!
Teen 路 POP PRECIOUS
The writing style is very unique and the plot seems nice! Though I personally wouldn't read this, I would definitely recommend it to my friends! Keep up the good work!
Eastern 路 Macy
Interesting story and I like the writing style. Though it is a little bland for my taste. I prefer books that draw me in immediately. But I see lots of potential! Good work!
Urban 路 foxyash
The book is really good at drawing the reader into a new world and putting them right into the shoes of the main character. Something I love in books such as these. Overall really good book! Keep up the good work!
Fantasy 路 Jay Haydn
Fantastic! Lovely first chapter! It did its job exactly as planned. It painted a lovely world for me to be drawn into and gave the story a lovely start! Lots of potential! Keep up the good work!
Fantasy 路 Mary Algen Guiang
This is a great book, though a little cliche and bland for my taste, I can genuinely say that this is a great book with lots of potential. Keep up the good work! 馃憤
Urban 路 Ethereal
The synopsis is pretty interesting. Though I'm sad to say I'm not really into these sort of mystery novels. Despite this the book has great potential and I'm sure readers will love it. Keep up the good work!
Teen 路 Sadistangel026
The characters, world and plot are all amazing on their own. Put together they make a great story and I absolutely love where the story's going!
Fantasy 路 Ramsha_Rais
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This book is amazing and I love the amount of effort the author put in to the book. It really pays off. The prose is magnificent and so are the characters and plot. Amazing job!
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Fantasy 路 TheMortalGod