Thanks for the chapter, the chuunibyou in the cultivation stories is really cringeworthy 😆. ... Not a fan of having cultivators in the team...What does meditation do in this world? It absorbs something from the air (totally not spirits or souls)? Does it create energy out of nothing within the body? Is the ultimate goal to abandon all of a person's humanity by removing impurities and becoming "gods"?
ch 0 4 Starting Life in the Forest
Fantasy · FearlessCloud01
Thanks for the chapter 🙂. Anime requires an advanced society and technology, so he is not far from that 😁. ... I think that the first line “Cave in Great Demon Law Forest“ needs something to separate it from the text below.
ch 0 3 A Strange New Place
Fantasy · FearlessCloud01
I liked the chapter, the Siblings are funny. ... If you want more views and comments, I recommend you to also post this story in Scribble Hub. The new series are published in the main page and the new chapters also appear in it, to read your story people first have to know it exist... but it is your novel, so take this only as a comment.
ch 0 2 The Long siblings
Fantasy · FearlessCloud01
Gokigenyou, FearlessCloud01 . I like the world structure and the main character. ... A “Queen“ in a cultivation story? is the queen the first consort?(Not a fan of chinese drama) Possible error: The title appears like “Chapter 1: chapter-1: Excuse me? what in the world...“ (Chapter two times) is that normal in web novel?
ch 0 1 Excuse me? What in the world…
Fantasy · FearlessCloud01
Thanks for the chapter. ... Here is a question that popped into my head, there is no need to answer it if you don't want to. How are the Bathrooms of the cultivation society? Do they have toilets and toilet paper?
ch 0 5 The Hunt
Wrecking Fantasy with Technology
Fantasy · FearlessCloud01