man this is just copy paste from the original , the only different thing is that esdeath replaced jin , not only that but because jin didn't show up here wil make him look like a coward from the perspective of the world.
ch 221 CH : 202 Jeju Island Raid (V)
Anime & Comics · GodOfGreedAs
very good chapter, one of the best one piece fanfic so far
ch 18 Chapter 18 - The Navigation Book! Eldoraggo Appears! [+18]
Anime & Comics · MrBlackWing
the last part is weird
ch 17 Chapter 17 - The Navigator and The Gunslinger!
Anime & Comics · MrBlackWing
please no more clones this time , it was the only thing that was bad for me last time
ch 57 [57] Setting the Board
Anime & Comics · Paradox_
plz don't go revolutionary route it's so boring
ch 0 6 Trouble
Anime & Comics · Konrad_iguess
this feel very forced , how was Obito so prepared whit a clone for the secret jutsu of the mc , the mc hit should land honestly
ch 27 Kaito Chapter 27: Unexpected
Anime & Comics · Tilct
didn't his family treat him bad before showing signs that he has talent , why he is ok whit that now
ch 0 9 Chapter 9: Potentials Test
Anime & Comics · blazuki
the mc feel like a side character
ch 0 8 Classes
Anime & Comics · human_man_69
the nerf for the spell book was unnecessary, also to much info dump
ch 25 Chapter 25
Anime & Comics · Socksniffer
this is so weird
ch 0 7 The three clowns
Anime & Comics · Aces_BigDaddy
this chapter make the mc feel very weak..
ch 16 CHAPTER 16: A Real Challenge (II)
Anime & Comics · GloriousMilfHunter
very good so far, everything seems to flow very natural especially the conversations
ch 0 4 CHAPTER 4: Annihilation
Anime & Comics · GloriousMilfHunter
to much inner monologues
ch 11 Chapter 11 Going Out
Anime & Comics · MinxMean
ther is nothing wrong whit the mc being op , i dont see any need for a rewrite
ch 0 1 Possible rewrite
Anime & Comics · Fenris_1
never in my life seen something more forced then this chapter
ch 149 Chapter 149 - Genin Test - Final
Anime & Comics · MonkWithAPen
to much chinese cliche
ch 13 The Social gathering gone to Social bashing 3
Anime & Comics · BruhGodKing
it is a metal that make you immortal in one of the specials episode heart of gold
ch 30 Chapter 30 - Clockwork Island! The Thief Brothers and The Trump Pirates Fleet!
One Piece: Hunter God
Anime & Comics · MrBlackWing