Maximus_Sen

1yr

Posted

Everything is amazing except... the pace of the story. I understand that this seems to be the author's style but come on, I had to waste 6 chapters about stuff that could have been said in 2 without the infordump. The cliffhangers are a lot and its very annoying. The novel started out pretty good but then the pacing turns slower and slower in the end, I hope the author does something about this.

However, now, he couldn't even leave. If he did, they could charge him with defecting the sect and send a kill order after him. He would definitely be under twenty-four hour surveillance to ensure he wouldn't leave the mountain. In fact, they could purposefully make life a living hell for him, attempting to force him to leave.

Paragon of Sin

Eastern · KevinAscending

Maximus_Sen

1yr

Commented

there's no way in hell that immortality doesn't exist in a cultivation world

Wei Wuyin replied with a hearty smile of his own. This crane had saved his life and allowed him to break free from whatever sealed his mind before. She had accompanied him since he truly started his journey in the cultivation world, and perhaps, if immortality doesn't exist, she would accompany him at his end.

Paragon of Sin

Eastern · KevinAscending

Maximus_Sen

1yr

Replied to Daoist814941

it would... the population would rise explosively

God Jin didn't care. He sent: "We'll make her an accomplice of the murderer as a spiteful, jealous woman, you can do what you wish to her then!"

Paragon of Sin

Eastern · KevinAscending

Maximus_Sen

1yr

Replied to BlinkToThePast

I mean if you physically can't live without a slave harem... then yes, you need it

Another one, which was beyond ambiguous was the concept of theft. You can steal, but you can't steal more than you need. This was so ambiguous he didn't even want to delve into it.

Paragon of Sin

Eastern · KevinAscending

Maximus_Sen

1yr

Commented

this is the only thing that makes sense

Another one, which was beyond ambiguous was the concept of theft. You can steal, but you can't steal more than you need. This was so ambiguous he didn't even want to delve into it.

Paragon of Sin

Eastern · KevinAscending

Maximus_Sen

1yr

Commented

I mean, what would she have? plans to destroy the sect?

"Oh?!" Xing Fu was shocked. She had no idea that was the case. Then doesn't that mean that as long as one goes to her container, they could take everything from her ring? Thinking this, she turned slightly pale.

Paragon of Sin

Eastern · KevinAscending

Maximus_Sen

1yr

Commented

why do people do that its so gross 🤢

As Chu Yan's corpse fell, his head in a bloody, unrecognizable mess, Wei Wuyin strongly sniffed, gathering a wad of saliva, and coldly spat on his corpse. "You ruined my fun, so do you even need to live? Piece of trash."

Paragon of Sin

Eastern · KevinAscending

Maximus_Sen

1yr

Commented

that... seems more like an assasin

Of course, spies were also able to strike from the shadows with deadly precision. Armed with information, they were masterful ambushers. With the prior knowledge of the opponent's weaknesses, their attacks were surgical and lethal.

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

Maximus_Sen

1yr

Replied to Apolonchene06

I mean... if I were to die as a virgin, I'd probably do it too lol

He was hunched over, cradling the left side of his chest. Each step caused him to moan, ragged breath barely escaping through gritted teeth.

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

Maximus_Sen

1yr

Commented

what type of heavy metal is that sword made of to weigh that much

The sword might not have seemed to be that heavy right now, but every extra gram of weight was bound to feel like a ton all too soon. As the weakest member of the group, he was already struggling to keep up, so there wasn't a lot of choice. Shedding a few kilograms of iron was the right thing to do.