I think the next templated can be like yukihira soma because after the war he can create a resturent or open a business after retiring as a ninja after defeating kaguya.
I think this fanfic has many potiential like developing the hidden village bringing industrial revolution. Building normal schools,and ninja school scientific and chakra related technology fishing industry,then capturing or annexing neighbouring nation,then economic development like united states, britain. It can be developed the village and upgrade it to country like the united states. It can be a very intersesting plot.Mc becomes the very first president.
This book has been deleted.
Stupid utterly just stupid chapters have reached 17 it ' the same killing, anger madness,shadow mc agian going in a cycle. I don't like this anymore.At this point i'm just tired reading this novel.i mean the author told that it' going to develop the plot but all i see is the mc shadow anger hatred killing again and again.i don't even know how to criticise it.it just a complete mess if you ask me.Just complete mess
This chapter has been deleted.
gdfs
Music & Bands · Darktionister_T56
I sometime think that the chapters are two short.i don't know if iam right but sometimes the chapter are big but these chapters were very short.
I just don't know what to say at this point.the shadow part,or the mc going insane.Sighhhh
This chapter has been deleted.
gdfs
Music & Bands · Darktionister_T56
I mean no offense to the author.It's just my personal opinion.
This chapter has been deleted.
gdfs
Music & Bands · Darktionister_T56
Now i think that the author is a sadist.i how much is the mc gonna suffer.i mean even the shadow is more like a sadist. I mean watching his own master suffer and he enjoys it.I just can't think how the plot will even progress.in 12 chapter all i see is mc suffer.and is the shadow a servant or amasterr i mean why is he not giving him power.imean no matter how much he gets physically strong if some with space power can escape easily.or send mc somewhere else.it's just giving very sadist vibe.nerfed mc Only physical streng and gets easily angry no divinity no shadow powerno magic power.and the shadow doesn'teven help him.only watch him suffer and gets happy when mc gets pain sad angry or insane.it just at this point i don't no what to say😑😑😑😑
This chapter has been deleted.
gdfs
Music & Bands · Darktionister_T56
The plot is very confusing.I mean the shadow.plus the power of mc.thres no explanations. Or why the two have same goals.or is the shadow a piece of power of mc.thre are many confusing thing in the story.
This chapter has been deleted.
gdfs
Music & Bands · Darktionister_T56
Aww man i waited for so long
This chapter has been deleted.
Dropped!!!!!!"(-
Anime & Comics · Raging_Bu11
First of all after reading the chapter some things don't make sense like immediately after isekai his mentailty changed in no time and he dosen't have an fighting experience. But he already adopted to the warring states period from a peaceful era.so that' a mess.and the mc's power are also a mess.no character development.with no poltical experience for a normal boy.this is my opinion
Shun Uchiha: One Click Upgrade
Anime & Comics · Kamery_Driver_1580