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Too Dramatic. Why don't you just write a korean drama Manhwa fanfic it might sound better than reading these cringy lines.

and don't tell me his dream to be no.1 hero it just becomes a generic MHA fanfic formula.

the MC has too much positive energy. I mean, he always see the bright side of people around him. Like how he see it's not almighty fault or how he wants to see his bakugo relationship moving forward. He is too "optimistic" if I'm not wrong on my understanding. Why don't you highlight a sin trait on him to make him more human. Like showing greed for power, lust for woman, envy for the strong, or even just being slothful just to show that he is not just a written character that followed a script written. I hope you see this.

It's good, but it is written by following a formula. It's too predictable that it gets boring the far you read it. Why don't you give some spice on it, like give your MC some attitude or stop describing the character in depth but just the broad idea on who he is. It's just a suggestion. I hope you will not get upset with what I said. Like I said It's good but needs just some spice on it.

FINALLY !!! SOMEBODY ADMIT IT!!!

no strong plot. it's just a guy inserted and doing what he wants. but it's good enough if you want some change. I enjoy it, by the way ( ignore my grammar, I'm too lazy to edit it)