Marc's death seems like a great waste of character to me, although the writer has shown not to do unnecessary things, I worry that all the time spent on the presentation, development and plot will disappear in such an abrupt way. We just have to wait to see how the story unfolds and if a character with a lot of potential was discarded or was it something that helped the story move forward and improve. I love this story and this comment is not trying to criticize the novel, I just doubt if this was the right decision
ch 231 2nd Heavenly Punishment! (4)
Fantasy · Wahi
X2
ch 112 I'm back!~
Eastern · Morvian
No me gusto el final y el prota es meh. El final final fue extremada mente abrupto, hay cosas por hacer y sub historias por terminar. Por qué todas las mujeres son ninfomanas?.
Fantasy · Ero_Saint
Me gusto mucho, pero el final es extremada mente desepsionante
ch 244 The most beautiful woman and the most well-kept secret (END)
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
Marc's death seems like a great waste of character to me, although the writer has shown not to do unnecessary things, I worry that all the time spent on the presentation, development and plot will disappear in such an abrupt way. We just have to wait to see how the story unfolds and if a character with a lot of potential was discarded or was it something that helped the story move forward and improve. I love this story and this comment is not trying to criticize the novel, I just doubt if this was the right decision
ch 231 2nd Heavenly Punishment! (4)
Eternal Thief
Fantasy · Wahi