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Michal_Olah
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it is because you strat at kingdom building. and you just destroyed you whole work because after he Betrayed everyone it's broken and not appealing and absolutely destroyed whole novel because it became trash without ani reason
I must remind you that there have been wars over silly things and fights between friends over silly things... be human and don't classify the MC as a "Saint"... Or don't idealize things because you think it's silly for you. Do you really understand the MC? , when the guy has to deal with the aggressiveness of his elemental body. Which as I've said much before, it affects him.....
World Of Warcraft: FanFic The Heavenly Star
Video Games · Audio_Coon
why the incest. I just don't get it !
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ch 0 5 Chapter 5: Just a Casual Day of Chatting.
Winter Spirit with a Chat Group
Anime & Comics · PuRplE
and for fanfic (Grampa Univers it's cool
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u tried to write without pov but is so hart and it take dabble time. so respect 🙏 👏 🙌
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ps you should think of way to punished gods for what they did. and if u make them mortals for centuries in reincarnation process it could work whit time line also I future he will fight gods with avangers.
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Percy Jackson: Greek god of nature
Book&Literature · DaoistyNyxQ4
what if u use this to give him power up I mean his divinity is (life and u could say creation so give him opposite like destruction from dbz). or meaby give him divinity to change humans in to minor gods and power to take divinity from everything god, titans, asgardians,. anyways that's just my thoughts.
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Percy Jackson: Greek god of nature
Book&Literature · DaoistyNyxQ4
like merlin
Name: Ambrosius Malphas
From Mortal to Divinity
Anime & Comics · Servant_Ambrosius
he dropped it. it's make me sad cause 😞 I like it. what a bummer 😕
MC is girl or boy iam confused there ?
I do understand but this is novel means but you don't understand that you're story is perfect kingdom building. after you destroyed what we were waiting and then revenge which last soo long doesn't make senses because you could use titan as a potential war between his kingdom. and to be frank with u its very boring and unfulfilled after revenge. because your whole novel was made for kingdom building. you absolutely trashed your own work and your explanations isn't helping in fact it's stupid
I'm not upset about the comments per se, I'm upset that some don't take the time to try to understand the "why" of things. I constantly repeat that not everything I write should be "profound" but it should at least have some purpose. In short, it must have logic.
World Of Warcraft: FanFic The Heavenly Star
Video Games · Audio_Coon