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Novel is good some sentences feel wrong but its negligible but antihero is wrong should be evil or villain.a person who kills for the fun of it or to release stress shouldnt be called antihero

One of most engaging harem cultivation novels i read chapters are long enough and characters are fun and feels fresh.story makes you want more.

i feel like this what the whole ''i am villain after ..... in a novel/game'' type of novels should aspire to be not a demon that thirst for blood but manipulative enough to corrupt or scheme the things to go his way but ''human'' enough.I feel like the romance in this novel is just the right amount of fluff and short but without making you forget the heroines but not overcrowd your head with their antics i love it.Keep up the good work

As you always tell your language skills could be improved other than that with the rewrites i feel like story became more well put together and pace is more captivating.For the cultivation-harem genre i think you captured something really fun If i can point out one issue i have with this novel and this genre in general more than 80% of the girls just fell in love withing 1 simple conversation other than i feel like pace is good now

Writing is smooth with little to no grammer mistakes that caught my attention.Characters are nice but i feel like they crush on him really easily probably there are other reasons for that will be revealed later but still there couldve been more interaction between them before at least they realize they are smitten by him.Other than that i feel like pace is good with captivating writing style keep up the good work.