nisan_kathar

1yr

Posted

1st of all, I read until 3cp and I couldn't read past them, because writing is so bad that its like some kids rambling, there's no grammar. because i didn't read pass 3cp, so I don't know how good is the storytelling and other things, that's what I give them honorary 5 star.

AS DARKSEID IN MARVEL (OMNIVERSE)

Anime & Comics · GodOfGreedAs

nisan_kathar

1yr

Commented

Bro can't you use more "," , "." and "paragraph change" . It's abomination without them.

ch 34 CHAPTER 34

AS DARKSEID IN MARVEL (OMNIVERSE)

Anime & Comics · GodOfGreedAs

nisan_kathar

1yr

Commented

Ni

No

In the World of Tensura WAY TOO EARLY, Another Route

Anime & Comics · Golden_Slime

nisan_kathar

1yr

Replied to nisan_kathar

Boruto and Himawari need better father.

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kkkkk..

Anime & Comics · iM_E

nisan_kathar

1yr

Commented

+1

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Anime & Comics · iM_E

nisan_kathar

1yr

Commented

No-harem please

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kkkkk..

Anime & Comics · iM_E

nisan_kathar

1yr

Commented

He be too op, if he 1st goes to hxh.

ch 51 Back to Reality

Lord of Dreams - A Multiverse Fanfiction

Anime & Comics · Houssem

nisan_kathar

1yr

Commented

No, no, and I don't know( never try it before )

ch 0 -1 You should give your power stones and leave a review. Trust me, I only want my own good.

Naruto: Tango with Death

Anime & Comics · SlyOW

nisan_kathar

1yr

Posted

Just wanna to give rate...... Just wanna to give rate..... Just wanna to give rate...... Just wanna to give rate..... Just wanna to give rate...... Just wanna to give rate..... Just wanna to give rate...... Just wanna to give rate.....