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2mth
Commented This has been a good story, but it's obvious your English editor hasn't been working lately. Pronouns are all over the place and inconsistent. I also am perplexed over references to “Seven Days of Noel” and the bizarre, bizarre dragon and Phoenix references. I’m sure it is cultural praise, but it doesn't translate. It makes reading difficult.
ch 83 Chapter 83
Pampered Like a Princess
Urban · XY
This would read better if written in the first person
Ryder had wanted this for so long, he had craved her taste and her touch for a while now but had always denied himself. But today, he could no longer control himself.
MATED TO HER ENEMY'S BROTHER
Fantasy · WinwritePawat_555