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the only really valid point I see in your review is grammar. About MC following Arthur: it seems you lack the understanding of a 'chosen one' type of plot TBATE has. There is a foundation and clear path of power that is laid for Arthur to get stronger - because literally no other being can take the same path. If taking the same path is ruled out there is simply no way of creating a powerful character on a level of Arthur in this world without making character too overpowered from the get-go. And if you suggest to make a character not on the same level as Arthut I wouldn't want to read that if I was a common reader. your remark on story and character development is dumb. You expect drastic character and plot development from a read that isn't even past a 50 chapter mark yet? And I don't assume that the reader should know the story to fully understand the story. You want me to explain all of the foreshadowing I did just plain and simple? You don't want a sense of mystery in a read? You are not reading an encyclopedia lol