Webnovel Author: Cloudthief - Novel Collection

It's a beyond interesting concept with good world-building, characters, and story-development. Only problem I have is the quality of the writing. The vocabulary is great, It's just the diction which doesn't poke me right. If the author fixes those small mistakes then I bet this story could become a great one! All the best luck to your author!

Sorry for the late response, but I'll answer now! The uploading schedule isn't set in stone, but I'll try getting a new chapter out every week, sometimes even a couple more if I'm able to. As for the pace of the story and the growth of the mc, both are pretty normal In my eyes, but I guess It would be considered a little bit quicker in others. I try to speed it up a little bit, but not to the point of where the story gets dull or the world-building and characters at the side get thrown away. Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it! [img=recommend]

Really appreciate the review, It means a lot. As for the uploading schedule, I'm inclined to agree. Even though the chapters are longer than usual, It's not an excuse for my sporadic release schedule. Sorry, I'll definitely try to improve on that!

From what you wrote, I agree, It's a little bit rushed in the forest past. As for why he went back to the orphanage instead of going somewhere else, he still considers that his home and was unaware of the 'time-skip'. Also, a wrongful impression you might have, the MC wasn't actually 'killed' in the orphanage but at the school, which is why he didn't go back there. If he did I would definitely add more exposition. But you're right, In the future chapters, It won't be as rushed as it was in the 4th, I can assure you that. Thanks for the constructive feedback, I really appreciate it!

I really like the dialogue in this novel. it really feels like I'm actually there and listening to their remarks and seeing their emotion. Very well done. the grammar, vocabulary and structure it's on point and I'm really looking forward to more of this author. Surreal work!

Novel is well-written, has great vocabulary, and awesome structure. as I was reading I could imagine the scenes that the author conveyed through detail. looking forward for more from this author!

I didn't expect his novel to be so well-written and interesting. it HAS completely hooked me in the first chapter, with the abilities one gets when they finally turn 14. I'm also seriously interested IN THE school arc that will occur in the following chapters. definitely adding this one to my library! The only thing that could improve a bit is if the paragraphs can't be so lengthy! That aside, an awesome novel.

It's a different kind of story from what I'm used to, and that's not necessarily a bad thing. The author has great vocabulary, structure, and emotion in his text which brings everything together neatly. Its good novel, albeit different, and I'm looking forward too more in the future!

It's not the usual genre I read, but it is really interesting and I'm hooked on the story. the author uses great diction, vocabulary, and portrays emotion very well in a story. looking forward to reading more, good luck author!

It's another sci-fi novel that seems to have a lot of potential. I'm really looking forward to the future chapters to come, and also really interested and what's going to happen to Seth after the ordeal he has suffered through in the first chapter. Let's pray for more chapters in the future!

The novel has just begun so it is difficult to give a comprehensive review but I'll simply state that I think this novel could soar in the future. It has an interesting concept that hasn't been widely used on this site before and I believe that the subsequent chapters will definitely bring some noticeable traction to the novel. Apart from that, the dialogue could use some working, but overall it's an awesome book!

It's still very early on but I can tell that this novel has a lot of potential. its details are on point, its a dialogue realistic and its flow surreal. I'm really looking forward to the subsequent chapters to come, thanks for the novel!

I just started reading and I got through five chapters in total. the book has a really interesting concept and hooks the reader with its prelude chapter of the bout between the two high-ranked Revokers. It's really left an awesome impression on me. The only problem I have with this novel is its diction and emotional expression is a bit lacking, and the writing is a bit simplistic and muddled at times. Though I'm not so concerned with this because the author is aware of his shortcoming and has stated in the footnote of his novel that he'll eventually improve, which I'm really looking forward to! That aside, the book can truly be something spectacular and it's really interesting. The world-background is great, updates stables, and the character design awesome - even though it can a bit more detailed at times. I'm really looking forward to continue reading and seeing the author improve and how the story will eventually unfold!