Ivanilson_Ibiapina - Profile

The beginning was good, but after 200 chapters it has declined a lot, I'm after 430 chapters and it's disappointing to keep reading this, it's full of filler and the author keeps remembering the story of something that was presented to a few chapters for about 5-6 chapters in a row and the reader already knows that story, and the character development leaves a lot to be desired, especially the women, their characteristics are almost always the same: hourglass figure with abundant breasts and buttocks, they have little development with them. Another thing I had high expectations for was alchemy but it was another disappointment, it's not that developed despite being one of the main focuses of the MC, it doesn't explain how he advanced level in Dao alchemist, of course there are some explanations like him having the soul of alchemy or their eyes. I also noticed some small holes in the script here and there, like when there's the competition on the planet Junia, it says that Tuo bihan had gone ahead, but a few chapters later we see him in the planet of myriad monarchs advanced to the next stage.

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