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Quite the imagination gone wild chapter you got going on here! 馃き馃槣
ch 97 Misconstrued Words
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Mmhmm! Some hard-core stuff going on there, huh?! 馃お
[Lad! Are you once again desecrating my words? Allow me to clarify! All those who opposed were destroyed never to stand again!]
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Mmhmm... Sure...
[Abominable! Are you asking me if I bedded men? When I say conquered, I mean in two different contexts you damned youth! All male groveled at my feet begging me to stop whereas the women begged for more!]
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Typo: be => being
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eye or eyes? I would assume eyes, but not sure if it was intentional or not.
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Interesting 馃槒
ch 92 Suffering Defeat In The Worst Way
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What about your own actions, Kayn? Back when Apollo was kicked out!
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each out => each other
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Still a ways to go to reach 1600 Zuls though, and has to be reached before 15.
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I understood it, but a mention of him turning 12 would have helped for those who might have been confused.
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Typo: likely => lightly
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That demon looks kinda plump though! 馃槣
ch 51 Awry Situation Inbound
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Dissecting sounds fun! 馃榿
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Typo (maybe)? Did you mean "chat", or "chart"?
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Typos: possessed => possess surprising => surprise
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He was 10 when he left. He completed the Kill/Level Quest in 8 months 4 days, and then slept for 2 weeks after killing the spiders. So it would probably be somewhere close/around 9 months at this current point. So age 11 is still accurate.
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Loved this chapter!
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Ooh! Interesting!
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