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Eh.. a good story can always have longer chapters you know...

5 stars for you Great Author. Make the chapters a bit longer plz and it'll be a cherry on top of the cake [img=update][img=More pls][img=In a daze]

The story seems good, writing quality can be a lot better....But the thing that frustrates me is that chapters are way too short. It would be greatly appreciated if you merge 3-4 of your chapters and then release them as one...

Wow !! This is so good . This is the most anticipated novel of my collection. Only one advice though plz increase the mc interaction to others a little...he gives off a hermit vibe. Plz increase the update frequency...T_T

it's sad to say but more the story progresses worse it gets.... it's very illogical whatever is going on in the most recent chapters....ash got betrayed but still loves pikachu ....got slapped by Cynthia but still tolerates her....plus the pov changes creates confusion and worsens the bad writing quality