Very well-written. You have a good grasp of detail, and the relationships between your characters are intriguing. You also do a good job at keeping the politics and powerplays interesting. I'm excited to see where you go with this!
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Very well-written. You have a good grasp of detail, and the relationships between your characters are intriguing. You also do a good job at keeping the politics and powerplays interesting. I'm excited to see where you go with this!
The Lady of Ice and Snow
Fantasy · pocchari