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Haha, you're welcome. I'm glad my obsessive grammar-oriented brain could be of some help. Aside from these few things, your work is very legable. It's always a treat to read. :)
ch 861 A New Home and A New Future, Guiding the Survivors from Mount Madia-as
Mutagen
Sci-fi · Exallion
Thanks for the chappy Exallion~
ch 861 A New Home and A New Future, Guiding the Survivors from Mount Madia-as
Mutagen
Sci-fi · Exallion
Thanks for the chappy Exallion, can't wait to see the new additions' reaction to the base...
ch 860 A Sentimental Reward, Fulfilling the Girl's Final Wish and Her Last Moments on Earth
Mutagen
Sci-fi · Exallion
..He's not gonna take the spirit with him, is he? Too bad. Thanks for the chappy Exallion.
ch 859 A Request from the Dead, The Terrible Fate of this Town's Survivors
Mutagen
Sci-fi · Exallion
I want a fourth child!! Thanks for the chappy Exallion~
ch 858 Roaming the Ruined Streets, Being Tailed by Unexpected Stalkers
Mutagen
Sci-fi · Exallion
Thanks for the chappy Exallion~
ch 857 Sunset in the Flatlands, Preparing the Camp and Cooking for Dinner
Mutagen
Sci-fi · Exallion
"Mark gave his permission and allowed her questions without hesitation."
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Mutagen
Sci-fi · Exallion
"their group were the right ones"
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Mutagen
Sci-fi · Exallion
"No one could know"
Previously, Sinogo seemed to be moving and attacking around the Tañon Strait. It would be nice if he stayed there since it would save Mark and the rest the trouble to find him. However, Mark was not relying much on this thought. The [Infected] were unpredictable individuals. No one would know and accurately predict their movements without actually influencing them.
Mutagen
Sci-fi · Exallion
Thanks for the chappy Exallion~
ch 856 Their Future in Her Hands, Bella's Response to the Invitation They Received
Mutagen
Sci-fi · Exallion
I'm just saying that superpowers should still function following some sort of logic, even if they are fueled by magic.
Gray ran towards the beast, using the blood that had sprayed on him to create a blood dagger.
Sadistic Player In A Fantasy Game World
Fantasy · LordofKaizen
Sorry, I don't know what you're talking about. Pedophile is a term that is used to refer to an adult that wants to sleep with a child...
She could steal the hearts of men in mere seconds if she just interacted with them a little. But for some reason, she kept herself away from the company of men.
Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil
Fantasy · Grayback
Thanka for the chappy Exallion~
ch 855 Recruitment, Convincing the Group of Survivors of Aklan
Mutagen
Sci-fi · Exallion
The word you're looking for is pedophile..
She could steal the hearts of men in mere seconds if she just interacted with them a little. But for some reason, she kept herself away from the company of men.
Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil
Fantasy · Grayback
should be hand, since he only has one of them now
Eren just moved his hands and targeted the beast's eyes with the dagger in his remaining hand. He had stored that dagger inside his boots and taken it out a while ago.
Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil
Fantasy · Grayback
"mind off the way"
"You know, here we are about to be killed, yet all you can think about are the people we left behind. I'm jealous I really am Tesse. I wish I could take my mind of the way I'm about to be killed," as Rey said this she began laughing hysterically.
Sadistic Player In A Fantasy Game World
Fantasy · LordofKaizen
I agree with a lot of what you've said here, but just to add, for anyone reading this review, the writing, at least in the earlier chapters, is a bit of a mess grammatically, and the main character's autism, at least in the earlier chapters that I've read, comes off as performative, which when paired with a pure evil mc, when done poorly, paints autism is an unhelpfully (incorrect and harmful) light. Now, keep in mind that I don't have a problem with autistic characters in general, or autistic villains specifically, but I do have a problem with these things being poorly written, since some people might not be able to figure out where the writing line ends and the actual condition begins. Just a caution to keep in mind if you plan to pick this one up.
Villain Retirement
Urban · Romeru