Yeah, sorry dude. It'll take a long till the next chapter to be uploaded, like 1-2 months.I'm very sorry but I have ministry exams so I could go to a good university, I'm trying to get above 90 points out of a hundred. Those exams will start early next month and I'll finish later that same month. Hopefully you will understand, and I'm once again very sorry that I can't make more chapters consistently.
ch 0 6 Chapter 6: A Not So Fantastic Encounter
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Don't worry, as all of his 'employees' are hand made robots made by the made genius Jurryrigg. So people can't possibly spy on him and his software is also Brainstorm who has an IQ (I know IQ doesn't matter as it's a stupid system in the real world, but in fiction they matter.) of 1 9 non-nillion, that's 30 zeros, it's practically impossible to hack by any person currently on earth. Hopefully what I've explained makes sense to you.
• Create a company: he called 'Wayne enterprise' which is in the city of New-York, and the first thing the company sold is cars, and those cars will be better than all the other ones, like lower fuel consumption, higher horse-power and being more comfortable to drive, plus being less expressive than the rest of the competition and he'll improve them when another company comes close to his own cars.
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Hahahaha, I will try, but don't expect much. haha
ch 0 6 Chapter 6: A Not So Fantastic Encounter
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Thanks.
ch 0 6 Chapter 6: A Not So Fantastic Encounter
Others · Shadow_Master_6537
haha, of course I'm alive.
ch 0 6 Chapter 6: A Not So Fantastic Encounter
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Hopefully, but I still don't know when.
"(nice, I have an amazing arsenal of aliens, of course the best transformation I have is between brainstorm and gax.)"
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That will make him way too powerful at beginning, but he'll unlock waybig later on.
"(nice, I have an amazing arsenal of aliens, of course the best transformation I have is between brainstorm and gax.)"
Others · Shadow_Master_6537
Thank you very much for your nice review.
ch 0 6 Chapter 6: A Not So Fantastic Encounter
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ch 0 6 Chapter 6: A Not So Fantastic Encounter
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Hope you guys enjoyed this chapter ☺️
ch 0 6 Chapter 6: A Not So Fantastic Encounter
Others · Shadow_Master_6537
yeah, that's great. Thanks for the advice. 👍
oops, it seems I relied to the chapter instead of you. But I did answer your question, and I hope you understood as to why.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: His Story Begins
Others · Shadow_Master_6537
It's because the prototype Omnitrix needed primus so it can actually work. However THE Omnitrix (the one that azmuth gave him at the end of the ultimate alien) doesn't have that setback anymore. Here, this is an easier way to understand: Think of primus as your computer and the Omnitrix is like an ipod, after downloading music from your computer to your ipod, you can then disconnect your ipod and continue listening to said music. There's a better explanation to your question if this one one didn't suffice. It's from YouTube, and their YouTube channel name is called(Ink Tank), also the video's called (everything that the Omnitrix can do) Hopefully this answered your question, please comment if it did or not.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: His Story Begins
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ch 0 4 Chapter 4: Finding The Way
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ch 0 3 Chapter 3: First Transformation
Others · Shadow_Master_6537
Ok I'm gonna say this, At the beginning I liked it very much, it was fun to read and pleasant at the same time, but slowly it started to become something I don't like to read anymore. I don't know why or how, maybe because you gave him Iron-man DNA which didn't make sense, since iron man as (Tony Stark) is human and his suit doesn't have DNA, plus you made overpowered and underpowered at the same time, like you gave him Alien x and Clockwork, which are Ben's most powerful transformations but they can't bring back people from the dead?, I'm sorry if that's what you don't want to hear but I don't like at all, it's your story and you can do whatever you want. Hopefully you'll improve your story.
ch 12 The End of the Beginning
Anime & Comics · Vanitas_24
Yeah, sorry dude. It'll take a long time till the next chapter to be uploaded, like 1-2 months. I'm very sorry but I have ministry exams so I could, I'm trying to get above 90 points out of a hundred. Those exams will start early next month and I'll finish later that same month, and I'm once again very sorry that I can't make more chapters consistently.
ch 0 6 Chapter 6: A Not So Fantastic Encounter
In Marvel With The Omnitrix
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