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I feel like there's a fourth option missing : explore the Divine Serpent Empire, which seems the most dangerous.The order could be B, C, D, A, as I agree with others that the war with the other world can wait.

It was well executed and I enjoyed it, good job!

While I enjoy the novel so far, it's getting really annoying how you keep repeating multi word noun to artificially increase your word count. In a single page of this chapter, you used Silver-bloom king sword 7 time when it wasn't necessary and it break the flow of the sentences.

Can you please stop using 'the orange red haired beauty' multiple time per chapter? It's starting to get annoying, just use 'she' or 'Eve', it flow much better and it's easier to read.

The bathtub scene followed by the blood sucking scene was awesome, keep going like that and it will be perfect!

Well... that chapter was disappointing and leaves a bad taste in my mouth. He's really going to forgive her just like that because she had 'good intentions'...

Lord Brother is such a cold and impersonal way of calling someone, it really doesn't fit Irina personality. Just Brother was much better.

Thanks for the chapter and Happy New Year! I hope the backstory isn't stretched too long and we quickly go back to the present. I can't wait to read more!

Where's Vivian? She hasn't been mentioned since they went to sleep. It's a bit weird that she's not present at the table.

There's no comment in chapter 280, maybe it got removed?

In my opinion it's better that way. I would have been slightly disappointed if they counted that fight as Nux win.

It's hard to rank them as they're all good characters, but for me it would look like this 1. Thyra 2. Skyla 3. Evane 4. Amaya 5. Astaria 6. Ember 7. Felberta 8. Lane 9. Edda 10. Allura 11. Arvina

Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter. I'm caught up on both of your book and now i'm sad that I have to wait for more. It's been a while since I've enjoyed a book this much. You're doing an excellent job and I can't wait to read what's next!

For sure, Erin is such a good character, its always fun to read when she is involved. Aura come in close second for me, she is just so cute!

I understand and I still really like the story, that's why I'm trying to give some feedback. Here's a few things that could have been better. Definitely give less details about the fight between minor characters, so it can be done in a few paragraphs instead of each fight taking multiple chapters. You can always give more details later if the character become more important. Also, since you are already introducing a lot of new characters and their relations between each other, if on top of that you start giving more details about the power system, it really slow down the pace and that's why it feel like an info dump. Lastly, I enjoy both of your books and I hope you can continue for a long time!

I enjoyed the novel so far, but the tournament is so slow and it's starting to get boring. We're not even halfway through the second year and I don't know if I can continue for much longer. Also, since the goal is to select the captain, I don't see why there's so many fights. The whole thing could have been much faster with just the top 5 fighting. Maybe it's to introduce new characters, but there's so many of them that by the time they become relevant to the story, we'll have forgotten about them. What I'm trying to say is that instead of being exciting, the tournament feel like a huge infodump filler that could have been avoided.

I'm not impressed with the sect so far. The goal was to make a strong force for Lilia and her friends, but its so divided that I doubt it would be effective. The amount of malice and pettiness is far beyond healthy competition. Even the supreme elders are hostile between each other instead of working together.