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wait what? Why??
ch 35 A day for making memories
The Criminal Who Stole My Heart
Teen · Michelle_Sosa
yes best chapter ever. You guys need to read this steamy chapter lol .
ch 34 Officially and forever his
The Criminal Who Stole My Heart
Teen · Michelle_Sosa
you and me both
ch 33 Surprises and Promises
The Criminal Who Stole My Heart
Teen · Michelle_Sosa
and there it is finally admitted it
His voice was so genuine and full of love. His eyes sparkled upon reciting every word. I felt so happy. It was as if I was a cloud floating in the sky. My heart exploited and I felt a million butterflies dancing in my stomach. Now I know that he feels the same. I want to have a relationship with this man. I felt everything around us fade. At this moment it was just him and I and that was the moment realization hit me like a ton of bricks. This criminal had stolen my heart.
The Criminal Who Stole My Heart
Teen · Michelle_Sosa
she is so in love
I can see her smile, her eyes had a sparkle I had never seen before and her skin glowed like she was a figment of my imagination. I had to hold her hands to make sure she was real. "I love being you princess cat. That is as long as you are my prince." She spoke looking right into my eyes. My heart pounded so loudly I was afraid she would hear it. I was in love and I could see something in her eyes as well. Could it also be love?
The Criminal Who Stole My Heart
Teen · Michelle_Sosa
I feel like he doesn't trust her enough if he insists on hiding who he is from her.
She was silent for a moment but then she inhaled loudly and spoke. "Why? Why not?" From the tone in her voice I could tell she was upset. Damn it. She asked me. What am I going to tell her? I can't tell her the truth. How could I possibly tell her that after my plan is completed its best that she doesn't know who I am or what my face looks like? So I told her the next best thing.
The Criminal Who Stole My Heart
Teen · Michelle_Sosa
yeah what is he planning to do?
I keep telling myself that she will be happier after and she just might be but will I? Actually I know I won't be. I will never be. But she does not deserve this hell I call a life. She deserves more and that is why I am doing this. But after all is said and done will she ever find it in her heart to forgive me?
The Criminal Who Stole My Heart
Teen · Michelle_Sosa
guys notice how she said are you leaving me? not are you leaving?
"Are you leaving me?" I tried to sound as normal as possible but I knew he noticed the worry in my voice since even I heard it. He then tried calming me down by giving me a smile but it only made it worse since it was obviously a fake one. I would know I have used them all my life. This smile did not reach his eyes.
The Criminal Who Stole My Heart
Teen · Michelle_Sosa
me too
ch 23 Making Changes
The Criminal Who Stole My Heart
Teen · Michelle_Sosa
she has no idea how much her words actually affected him
ch 22 Crazy and confused
The Criminal Who Stole My Heart
Teen · Michelle_Sosa
she needs therapy
ch 20 Pain, trauma, and regret
The Criminal Who Stole My Heart
Teen · Michelle_Sosa
like wow that was some chapter. I have to re-read that lol
ch 18 Forced to be his
The Criminal Who Stole My Heart
Teen · Michelle_Sosa
i've noticed this website changes some of the words or better yet hides them but others not. My thing is why hide the word rape and not raped it's the same thing but in past tense. that is just weird
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The Criminal Who Stole My Heart
Teen · Michelle_Sosa
ohhh now this is interesting
ch 17 Anger, submission, and making you mine
The Criminal Who Stole My Heart
Teen · Michelle_Sosa
her heart is his even when he is being a monster
ch 16 Broken promises and punishments
The Criminal Who Stole My Heart
Teen · Michelle_Sosa
oh that's not good
"Get ready princess, tonight I'll make you mine"
The Criminal Who Stole My Heart
Teen · Michelle_Sosa
ouch
"Because I wanted to, because I hate you, and because you are nothing but a monster! I regret the second I decided to save your live. I did it because I wanted to be free, free from you, and because you are nothing but a worthless deranged criminal!" She spat out, her voice full of disdain. Shadow first showed pain but it was quickly replaced by hate. This is what Marie wanted, she wanted it to end, and she was ready to accept her fate, her death.
The Criminal Who Stole My Heart
Teen · Michelle_Sosa
This truly has me on the edge of my seat
ch 15 A criminal's anger and a broken promise
The Criminal Who Stole My Heart
Teen · Michelle_Sosa
The story was simply amazing. The characters were powerful but not invisible, which only made it more real. There were so many twists in the story that had me on the edge of the seat. I loved it. I recommend it to everyone. The ending was fantastic. I mean I really thought it was a tragedy for a second. Great job writer.
The Criminal Who Stole My Heart
Teen · Michelle_Sosa