Masan are the dwarves agents? or the dwarves are Masan slaves?
"Chonky… This is… a slave city of Dwarves!"
Fantasy · MisterImmortal
As a loyal reader and fan of this work, I'm starting to feel concerned about the future of the story. I don't know how to express my opinion ... But I feel like the story begin to lose Its energy...I don't how to explain exactly but I just feel like the last chapters have no feelings conveyed. it's like blank paper with just words and no emotion. The story begins to lose its brilliance lately. Especially from the mc assassination incident and how the shadow of massan popped out of nowhere ... The events are too rushed, you could have definitely taken your time to explain things and convey the events more clearly and with more energy... I have a feeling that you are losing passion for the story which translated to this huge drop in quality in the last chapters. I really hope you could find a solution and revise the latest chapters. I don't mind a hiatus or something if you want to rethink things or take a rest. But just do something please because the story begins to lose its brilliance.
ch 481 480. Church Of The West
Fantasy · MisterImmortal
RIP my appetite. *sigh* I was eating when I read this paragraph and the one above ... I literally stopped eating. This is a good lesson. I will never ever again eat while reading this novel. At least not until the war volume end.
It was like someone had filtered the majority of the water out of a sewage pipe and filled a pool with everything that remained.
Fantasy · Warmaisach
Agh! I can't wait to know ... When the next chapter will be available?
"The stars are aligned. The time has come. The Core Temple awaits us, Johnathan Colt Westerling."
Fantasy · MisterImmortal
How did she know? ... 😲 don't tell me she is his previous wife, the one he always spoke about.
"The stars are aligned. The time has come. The Core Temple awaits us, Johnathan Colt Westerling."
Fantasy · MisterImmortal
is this his original name in the previous world ?
"The stars are aligned. The time has come. The Core Temple awaits us, Johnathan Colt Westerling."
Fantasy · MisterImmortal
How are the chapters update gonna be this month? 2 chapters per day or just 1?
ch 463 463. When the Heavens Wept [VOLUME END]
Fantasy · MisterImmortal
The duke*
"As my end approaches, I have decided to entrust you with the Duchy's leadership. With Lord Bard's endorsement, you will soon become a Grand Wizard and wield more influence with the Holy Land than a mere old and weak Duke." The Baron made the unexpected announcement.
Fantasy · MisterImmortal
no, he left them alone.
Letters *
Sylvester finished the letter and put a few plague samples in a small strong glass box in the package. He sealed everything and then handed it over to the special running men for the Holy Land.
Fantasy · MisterImmortal
But isn't that a little dangerous? The Mc has sent two important letters with this 'company'! Does the church not have their own running men for such sensitive information and orders? What if they were corrupted as well or the shadow of massan also control them? doesn't that mean he could intercept the important information or even send false ones?
Sylvester finished the letter and put a few plague samples in a small strong glass box in the package. He sealed everything and then handed it over to the special running men for the Holy Land.
Fantasy · MisterImmortal
I see! Which means they are an independent organization or let's say a 'company'?
Sylvester finished the letter and put a few plague samples in a small strong glass box in the package. He sealed everything and then handed it over to the special running men for the Holy Land.
Fantasy · MisterImmortal
Where did he find those running men at? isn't he in a city, that supposedly declared itself as a new kingdom with no clergy in it?
Sylvester finished the letter and put a few plague samples in a small strong glass box in the package. He sealed everything and then handed it over to the special running men for the Holy Land.
Fantasy · MisterImmortal
Congratulations! By the way, are the updates rate returning to normal anytime soon?!
[ANNOUNCEMENT: Thanks to all your support, this book has won the WSA 2022 Nomination Award. It's not much, but it's honest work tbh. Again, thank you all for your awesome support.]
Fantasy · MisterImmortal
2 chapters away from the 400 mark! Any surprises for this memorable occasion?
ch 398 398. Widowmakers
Fantasy · MisterImmortal
the problem is not in the story pace but in the updates. since that mass release last year ( December ) you jave been posting only a chapter per day and in some occasions two, but most of the time one a day. So, I hope you can increase the updates to two chapters per day.
ch 392 392. Gracia Will Not Forget
Fantasy · MisterImmortal
thanks man!
ch 356 356. Battle of River Pass - Murphy's First Law
Fantasy · MisterImmortal
It's been 20 chapters since Nick started his training.I'm not against reading about the Mc training and improving because that's part of the story. But it's been 20 chapters, Author. And this training is still going on, so things are becoming boring. Especially since aside from the mysterious encounter with Julian, there was no significant event.So I would like to ask when this training gonna end? Is it gonna last for a whole arc? ( like at least 30 chapters?).Thanks for your work.
ch 136 Chapter 136 – Recovery
Kill the Sun
Fantasy · Warmaisach