something about myself
I feel like it's a copy and paste of a previous chapter. I'm guessing a premonition but to use an entire chapter to go over it again?
ch 49 Mine
Fantasy · jpsina
the chapters are already short and costly, so including an alternate point of view that is almost identical to the previous chapter is frustrating and unnecessary fluff
ch 34 I knew
great job creating an emotional connection with the reader. anger, sadness, frustration, well done
ch 14 Chapter Fourteen
Fantasy · ShadeBladez
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
I feel like it's a copy and paste of a previous chapter. I'm guessing a premonition but to use an entire chapter to go over it again?
ch 49 Mine
The Forbidden Alpha
Fantasy · jpsina