Gabriel_Hill4Real

2yr

Posted

An amazing novel. I do admit, I was confused at the beginning, but as I went on, I started understanding more and more. There are a bunch of typographical errors, but I think the plot of this story makes it hardly noticeable

I Fell For Him Accidently

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Gabriel_Hill4Real

2yr

Commented

"handsome" 😂 I like the way he thinks

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Gabriel_Hill4Real

2yr

Commented

She is officially my favourite character. Please who again is their mother? Mum who? Her opinion is not valid

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Gabriel_Hill4Real

2yr

Replied to Mediocre_author

Thanks for the review. I've returned the favour👍

With You In Me

Realistic · Gabriel_Hill4Real

Gabriel_Hill4Real

2yr

Posted

The very first paragraph of this novel already drew my attention. The writer's grammar is on point. He/she must've really been listening in English class. However, I do believe the chapters are a bit too long to be one chapter. Apart from that, every other thing is perfect. His use of commas is moderate, his paragraphing is okay, and his main character actually has a personality. Good job on this one[img=recommend]

The Warrior's Story

Fantasy · Mediocre_author

Gabriel_Hill4Real

2yr

Commented

I love it when the very first paragraph of a novel is so aggressive 😩⛓️

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The Warrior's Story

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Gabriel_Hill4Real

2yr

Replied to Meg_Goodhope

Yesss

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Gabriel_Hill4Real

2yr

Commented

As much as I hate to admit this, Adanna is right.

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Gabriel_Hill4Real

2yr

Commented

You had to make the poor dad die!😥💔

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Gabriel_Hill4Real

2yr

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My leading character literally has the same last name. And his initials are also J.B. This alone is making me read more!

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Gabriel_Hill4Real

2yr

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I love it so far! I still can't get over the fact that people actually answer "Ma" or "Sir" when their parents call them. If I try that my parents will slap me hard.😂

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