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This is actually a fun problem I don’t see authors tackle. Some people just suck at secrets and it must make it hard when they’re an amazing friend but you have secrets to keep.

Yup that tracks with Yuukis personality. I like how different races have different facets to their subordinate contracts too.

Yknow it was mentioned Vanessa alone didn’t take up a full ‘core’ like Nell and Rhea. As much as I like Erina, I’d love Yuuki to get that permanent bond as well. She seems like she would thrive with the reassurance.

I’m a big fan of the story. There is a lot I could gush about from how well written the core cast is to how well fleshed out they are. The subtle hints at Elysias power growth and how you’ve written her wonderfully as being overpowered and humble without falling into the bad tropes of that. If I had to complain on anything its maybe spreading the storyline too thin. Earth was a great way to wrap up her background and give her closure but adding an entirely new war of the gods arc, new secondary cast and such felt like stretching the plot too thin. I’d have preferred the Ruvoid god stay dead and all that plot stay hidden until after the ruvoid war if it is even needed.

I admit the main thing I dislike is them getting caught up in the ruvoid gods pace. There’s so many other routes they could take rather then waiting and seeing.

Yknow what? I adore Noelle and she seriously brings some common sense to the party. But I actually like her reluctance and consideration for ending it. As much as I like Noelle having someone turn down our MC on a permanent (or even temporary) basis could also be an amazing bit of character growth. Honestly considering her hang ups I’m more surprised she’s still looking for new girls it seems and not more clinging to the ones in her group. That said you are doing a great job and I’m eager to see how she grows.

Yknow I wonder when Crystal, Dixie and Sam will just start referring to themselves as Emilia’s Harem. They are starting to thrive alongside the other girls and while they’re all technically poly (despite Emil’s jealousy), I feel like they’d get a giggle describing themselves as her Harem.

That was a smooth way to demand the earth gods help.

Yknow… .I hope they like Victor with Erina. I’m it a huge fan of the bird but a demigod spirit would definitely keep Erina safe!

Sylvia tried gotta give her that

And see that wasn’t the vibe I got. I felt in a well Xianxia style vibe; Cynthia is cultivating chaos which means she’s always fighting for control. Everyone Cynthia has met on the same path had to fight for control. And then she realized her Host pretty much has a Chaos-Root; Natural talent. I imagine later on we may learn Cynthia chose our MC cause she felt ‘compatible’ too.

Psh when Cynthia calms down I think she’ll approve. Of course the villainess she chose is a talent without equal!

You say “the plane might crash” I say “Free plane!”

Bet the rampaging victory bird hunted her down for info 😂