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Like this? The only thing that seems really better in the Hashirama mode is its rapid use (but the main character can use the same as Naruto). And against Otsutsuki, the Mudren's Mid of Hashiram is useless. It's not a fact that Tobirama did not have a sage regime at all, the sages regime required the accumulation of energy sitting in one place, and the force he gave was controversial, depending on the call (not to mention whether Tobiram call agreement). Therefore, it is not a fact that Tobirama at all saw the meaning in the wise village, his power, and so one of the strongest in the world (and he also has a brother) and the power of the sage does not seem so significant and necessary, this force cannot be said that it is constant. (Yes, and the Mudren of Hashirama Mode was on regeneration, of course, the regeneration of the limbs is good, but in general, for Tobirama, there were no such plates in this, which would have overlap the minuses)

I never understood the joy of the main characters from the fact that they are cared for so much. Of course, I understand everything, but when you are over 20 and they are worried about you during a battle with a child, it will be at least annoying and humiliating. Or constantly exaggerated reactions, it would seem that the main character simply cut his finger, but how much drama comes from this

What nonsense, to stop a war started because of the murder of an uncle just because of children fighting. If I were that guy, I wouldn’t know how to react to this, especially considering that our interests are not clear. If they win there will be no further war, but what if we do?

A ridiculously common cliche, the red-haired girl from a cool family is good, but the main character ignores her, which is why she falls in love with the main character.

It's hard to read, because every time it infuriates me that the chapter ends so quickly.

I think Tobirama is more than capable of mastering Sage Mode. And given Tobirama’s knowledge and talent, he can even improve the sage mode, taking Orochimaru’s seal as an analogue. (And in the battle with Otsutsuki, the first sage mode will not help much. There, Tobirama's intelligence is needed to bring the sage mode to the level of the 6 paths sage)

Honestly, I'm more worried about unlocking Tobirama's template than having Makuton. Makuton is useful, but in my opinion it is weaker than Tobirama's template. Makuton is good against bijuu, against susano, against some other huge creatures, but against ordinary people, Tobirama’s techniques are better (And in general, Tobirama’s template is better than Hashirama’s template. Firstly, because of the hunt for Hashirama’s genes, and secondly, Tobirama - a genius with many cool techniques (what is the 4th Shinobi War worth) Thirdly, Tobirama’s mobility, Tobirama was good at everything (not counting his students), and Hashirama is simply strong.

Yes, but in order to show this, you need to not just at some point make the moment “Emotions influenced, got hit,” you need to more or less lead to this and not dump it out when it’s convenient. Otherwise, it looks at least strange, as if the author himself had not decided on the character of the main character, showing at one moment a 100% cold-blooded brow, at another brow who seems to be simply hiding his emotions.

Definitely tires out the main character. Even Tsunade reacted, but the main character with a reaction higher or level than Minato did not. I understand that you need to find a reason for Tsunade to save him, but don't do it so stupidly. I would have done more than just get stabbed in the back by Kazuki that Tsunade saved him from, or a sudden genjutsu that Kazuki didn't expect due to his arrogance which served as a lesson to him. But nothing like that, because the plot required it. It doesn't matter that he was still calm until the end of the fight, although Tsunade seemed to be seriously injured, and before that Danzo wanted to kill him at the hands of his family. The main character didn’t care throughout the entire fight, Danzo did so much against him, and Kadhuki didn’t care, so the reaction at the end is unclear. (The same Tobirama may be calm and at the same time surrounded by thorns, so no one will touch Tobirama ). Before this there must have been a lot of speeches like “Danzo, you are a vile mite of Konoha, a pathetic little girl who cries because she didn’t get what she wanted, I wouldn’t have paid attention to you if you hadn’t started first. But now, Danzo, I will destroy everything you have created, I will destroy what you have worked for, and I will hang your pathetic head on the Hokage Rock." , tension, it could have been fully explored in this chapter, but it wasn’t.

They were washed brains, this is not just a seal, theoretically sister can be saved, but this is not a fact, the murder of the father and mother at the brother can have too strong influence. And he doesn't need it, he did not consider them their family, and he doesn't need his father.

A rather stupid act on the part of Deeper, he must understand that, first of all, Mabel is a child, and it is natural for her to do stupid things. And given the powers of the Devil Fruit, she could accidentally do a lot of bad things that need to be monitored and destroyed. I think a barrier-type fruit is enough for her (In the form of a ball, which she once wanted to buy). Pacifica can use the "Awa Awa no Mi" fruit, it suits her. The forces are of course weak, but they don’t need more now.

main character are you serious? 3 thousand points for this? Are you passively farming points or what?

How boring. “I was afraid of your reaction,” they, “What, we would accept you,” he, “I’m so glad,” I, “how unexpected, who would have thought, a good family, this is so unusual, how interesting , I don’t care at all.” Reading about ideal relationships is as boring as possible, no empathy or insight for Ethan’s parents, the usual beautiful templates, if the main character was an orphan in a past life, then we can say that the author has completely given up on family relationships.

Sword? Haha, he will be laughed at, who in their right mind would use a sword when there is an Avada Kidavra? Even teleport does not solve this problem; you can wave your wand faster than swinging your sword. It looks cool for an ordinary person, but hilarious for a magician. The overwhelming power of magic is what has power and respect.

It’s a pity that he didn’t say something like: “Back in the Hokage’s office, I thought about saving your reputation, but now I understand that you are absolutely not worth it. I didn’t feel any special love or affection for you, I just didn’t wish you harm, but now I see that you’re not worth it at all. Tell me, what did your loyalty lead to?! To death not by my hand? to trying to kill the hero of the leaf? Trying to kill your own son? I hope you're glad you at least tried it. (but actually everything is good, especially the ending, the cold laugh is really good)

And all because Hiruzen is a politician. If Tobirama were here, no one would dare to do such an act, because Tobirama would not tolerate it, and would immediately hang the culprit by the balls. It’s surprising that these are his students, who would have thought that the students of the smartest Hokage were such scum. Both go to two extremes: one is too soft, the other is too hard. How did he do it?

Let me remind you that the main character is reincarnated into Minato and he is definitely over twenty. Why he liked the child only God knows.

The main disadvantage of reincarnators, without a doubt, is that the character remains the same. Not everywhere, but here yes. GG wants to become Hokage, protect the village, be with Kushina and give birth to a child, also according to canon. Why ? Well, he just has absolutely no goals of his own, he wants to become Hokage simply because there must be a canon, he trains because there is danger nearby, and even in training there is no individuality that a reincarnator should have, if not for the presence of the daughter of Tsunada and Mikoto it would be even harder to read, a slightly improved version of Minato even sounds boring

Daughter of Tsunade and Kushina. It will be very difficult for the main character

What nonsense, zombies everywhere, apocalypse. gg: It takes several hours to bury the corpses of random zombies. I realized this with people in the beginning, but spending so much time on unfamiliar zombies is too stupid.