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why is there so many grammar mistakes , is the author changed? story is not as interesting as it was before and there are so many mistakes

so confusing who is talking to who ? it's all he Yi name everywhere

author plz take note and correct the grammar , u made this mistake in almost all chapters some times it feels annoying to read because of this

oh my god , so much of grammar mistakes , story is so good but because of " he" " she " mistakes it's making the reader very confused , and loose the interest to read

I hate u author , I cried when hanrun left with zizi without even turning back to look at shuang who was standing all alone, just to make yanrun n zizi together u shouldn't have maid shuang a bad girl, she ready have pathetic life along with that u should not have made her a bad girl, I hoped that yanrun n shshuang would be together but it shshattered, 7 years love finished just like that, yanrun accepted zzizi just like that just after a minute, no it should not how been like this, it feels like yanrun was wishing for shuang to reject him, ( sarcasm ) , I'm deleting this novel not reading anymore, I cried for shuang, it hurt me alot

u are awesome author, the way of ur sentence formation, and those dialogued , wow , I'm laughing so much

why eveyone in this story have green eyes🤔