How much aura, I think it’s supposed to be
"It's impossible I've tried everything, no matter how much sure I pour into it, there is no difference" Daemon shouted out with exasperation as sweat poured down his body he had removed his tunic a while back as to not ruin it.
Book&Literature · TheManUnderTheBed
Also I think the perfect ability would be something akin to nobunagas ability
The man, with silver hair and a regal presence, was none other than Ser Barristan Selmy, a legendary knight known for his skills and wisdom. He had served as a member of the Kingsguard and was renowned for his loyalty and valor.
Book&Literature · TheManUnderTheBed
I think he served two dragon kings plus Bobby b after if you didn’t go grey by the first to your just as crazy, also up pretty sure areys has at least gone for the no hair cuts and finger nail clipping by this point.
The man, with silver hair and a regal presence, was none other than Ser Barristan Selmy, a legendary knight known for his skills and wisdom. He had served as a member of the Kingsguard and was renowned for his loyalty and valor.
Book&Literature · TheManUnderTheBed
This is actually kinda dope idea, also like the category name changes definitely feels more grounded.
"This is my Aura ability I call it Castling" he says with a chuckle at the joke though Lyanna and Daemon just look at him blankly.
Book&Literature · TheManUnderTheBed
That or a war hammer
Big Pete's grin widened, his eyes filled with dark intent. He swung the massive sledgehammer onto his shoulder effortlessly, a menacing display of his strength. "You're in no position to refuse," he said, his tone dark and dangerous.
Book&Literature · TheManUnderTheBed
Should probably be a club ore something not a sledgehammer, even with the added aura this is still medievalesk time period.
Big Pete's grin widened, his eyes filled with dark intent. He swung the massive sledgehammer onto his shoulder effortlessly, a menacing display of his strength. "You're in no position to refuse," he said, his tone dark and dangerous.
Book&Literature · TheManUnderTheBed
Very well written so far. I am quite inerested on where this will go.
ch 0 4 Chapter 4
TV · PathLiar
Wonderwoman from the universe where batman is a vampire and superman was raised by Mexicans i belive. she was suposes to marry orion to have peace between both factions.
Beside him was a woman, a black haired beauty who looked enchanting. She was adorned with a cloud white, void black, and golden armor. She had a sword at her side, as well as blue eyes with her red hair. Unlike the man beside her, she had a more relaxed stance and eyed Drüin closely.
Others · Necro_
The riverlands ises to be under harren a iornborn hence harrenhall in the riverlands and the crown lands used to ne apart of the stormlands hence the seven kingdoms.
And again, as had been expected, the lords of the Seven Kingdoms... or Six excluding the Iron Islands, were quick to respond to his call, their morale already on an all time high from the victory against the Mad King some years ago.
TV · Dreizehnn
Pretty good story do far, some small spelling and grammar mistakes. this isnt a harem story right, could we get supergirl under darksides control as a love imtrest.
The God of Might could hear Norik neigh, showing that Odin and Frigga had taken off. He smirked, feeling that he at least accomplished getting Barda's objective away from her. But she still had a smile on her face, making Drüin unsure as to what Barda was here for. "Did you think that I was here for that old man?", Barda questioned with a mocking tone, "Odin is nothing to Darkseid, he does not lead his wars....you do."
Others · Necro_
Hey man do you know when we might get an update, thanks
ch 0 2 Chapter 02: Lineage
Anime & Comics · 1Shadow_Monarch1
Honestly tis was probably the best way to keep me intested in the story.
ch 26 The Story of Kror Part I
Anime & Comics · Carrots123
So far the storys pretty good, although its kinda fast in pace the story works. im interested in how he reacts with cannon characters. i hope the harem is on the smaller side. its the mountin king, his general and who else?
ch 20 End of an Era, Beginning of a new one
Anime & Comics · Virtuosso
Hay man dont want to sound pushy but will this story receive and update.
ch 0 3 Chapter 2: Floor 2-Flying Shark Fin Soup
Anime & Comics · Fallen_One
I think you mean Eve here who’s Samantha
They both returned to Professor Hiles' house; the guy really had his evil lair in his basement. Mark and Samantha inspected the place, but everything seemed to be in order, if you didn't count the unconscious student with a bomb strapped to his chest.
Almost Invincible (Invincible SI)
Anime & Comics · EmmaCruzader