mistake here
"I didn't want to intrude before, but when the way you drank the wine… I was sure that at the moment that you would not be that cheap sh*t. But I am 100% sure that you would like the Agor wine very much." Aria said.
Fantasy · Aladin666
mistake
On a huge mountain and mad could be seen clad in black armor. He had brown skin with brown color hairs. He was around 6 and a half feet tall and have bulging muscles all over his body. He looked like a very fierce warrior. He had a very big hammer on his back. And behind him, a group of people was standing in an upright position.
Fantasy · Aladin666
first line mistake
"This type of potion is very on the second floor. It is present in a good quantity on the third floor. But that does not mean that this potion should be here." Park Go Gum said.
Fantasy · Aladin666
first line mistake
"I don't that information myself my lord. Even my mistress was puzzled by this request. But I know this loyal subordinate in person. He knows where he lies in the hierarchy of strength. Yet he requested a meeting with you in person. I think that he had found something that he would rather discuss in with your personally." Claire said.
Fantasy · Aladin666
"but the work was not done yet" should be the correct line.
After making a network of lines in the circle on the backside of the shield, Arvin drew different runes, and then he joined all of them in a specific manner with the help of the network of lines. Thus the rune formation was ready. But the work was done yet. One has to give power to the rune formation so that it could actually start working. Loki told him that, the more complex the rune formation is, the more power it would need to start working.
Fantasy · Aladin666
so far story build up is great. keep doing the good work
ch 24 Chapter-23<HTC branch-3>
Fantasy · Aladin666
wasn't her armour had red color?
(Check this paragraph comment for Abby art!)
Fantasy · Drip
looking forward to it