If dragons can use haki, use devil fruits and can speak why would they let themselves become slaves of the Targaryens?
ch 0 3 I’m continuing this fic
TV · Ash_D_Born
It would be interesting if this Athena is from the PJO world.
ch 37 Chapter 36
TV · Inkbot
Stats shouldn't be a whole chapter.
ch 59 Body Enhancement and Skill Mastery.
Book&Literature · Axel_wheel
Now he has to go the long way and across the entire continent if he wants to go to Essos and also deal with hatred of all the people of the place he will live in now. Catelyn also got what she wanted it seems.
ch 58 Easy Mode/ Hard Mode
Book&Literature · Axel_wheel
Those islands are just barren rock where you can't grow anything. Its a very bad deal. Also he already promised most of the people that worked there to take them back to the mainland so is he now going to tell them to forget about it and stay there. Most people won't want to settle on the iron islands.
ch 57 Accept or not!
Book&Literature · Axel_wheel
Ever since Rose's introduction the MC seems to turn into a joke.
ch 45 Chapter 43 - Hogwarts (2)
Anime & Comics · MaliciousPrince
Seems like Rose has no idea about magic so i hope you won't have her match the MC in power. I was disappointed when he said she would win against him in a battle of attrition.
ch 40 Chapter 38 – Hogwarts Express (2)
Anime & Comics · MaliciousPrince
Yeah no this can be taken as a straight up attack at a Lord Paramount in his own home.
ch 18 Journey of the Stormlands (2)
TV · marcoo
Instead of calling himself a god and possibly offending other gods he can just say the truth that he is Rhllor's champion. The god just needs to send a vision to Melisandre and he would have hundreds of followers immediately.
ch 0 9 Powers And Limits (Part 3)
Book&Literature · Spartan1
Is he dumb? Rickard is right there so ofcourse its before the rebellion.
ch 0 5 Winterfell (Part 2)
Book&Literature · Spartan1
If Nick survives this fight and the MC doesn't tell abyone about Nick i would start cheering for Nick to kill Orion.
ch 126 Chapter 126 : Against The Basilisk
Book&Literature · kamidemond
Is this going to be a slash fic?
ch 0 6 Chapter six
Book&Literature · writingoutofbordem
The gods seem to be pretty useless.
ch 103 Chapter 103
Anime & Comics · Ryusenka
You haven't revealed anything yet so he is a kid till than.
ch 119 Chapter 119 : Following The Spiders 2
Book&Literature · kamidemond
I don't understand why he is so obsessed with Arya? She is the type to speak out of turn in a meeting and insult some foreign lord or noblewomen without even thinking about it.
ch 52 Oaths and Vows
Raiden's Storm (ASOIAF)
Video Games · SovereignOfHeaven